The 100 (Qfeast Edition)

So I posted a question asking if people were okay with being added to the story. So yeah fun X3

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Chapter 15.

"Bloody Mess Part 3 Finale" Abby

I sat in the drop ship freaking out. 'If these grounders want us dead and we have lost almost half of us we stand no chance.' At that moment foot steps approached I looked up and saw birds then they sighed "You're thinking we're doomed huh?"

I looked down again on the verge of tears. Then they lifted my chin and smiled "What if I told you I found a bunker to hide in. It's big enough for six people and so far I've got five including me. Wanna be lucky number six."

I slowly wipe away the tears and slowly nodded. They smile brighter "Okay good. We're leaving tonight while everyone's asleep. Be ready"

(A Few Hours Later)

Quick Author's Note: Look I'm really tired while writing this part of the chapter so if you could just not be mad with some spelling mistakes or Grammar mistakes that'd be great. Just let me know. Thanks

I sat awake looking around at my friends sleeping around me and I started to feel guilty. 'If I did survive in this bunker what would happen to the others.'

At that moment a small whistle came from outside the drop ship. I left and when I got out I saw Birds, Jello, Phoenix, and two girls I didn't recognize "Okay we're all here now let's go." Birds said leaving the camp. After about four minutes we started to hear things. I looked around when suddenly a spear hit one of the girls sending her flying into a tree. We all ran as fast as we could when the other girl suddenly screamed and was caught in a bear trap. birds went to help her but Jello grabbed him and kept running. Eventually we got to the bunker and hid inside then we heard a gun click and turned around and that's when we saw Seg. "Huh? It's you guys?" He put the gun down and smiled "Oh god I though everyone was dead I've been hiding down here for a long time..."

Birds hugged him and slowly everyone else joined. We were happy for a moment when suddenly there was a thump on the hatch door. Seg quickly ran to it and moved a bar on the hatch locking it. We all sighed in relief "So Seg... We have to stay down here for a while..."

Seg nodded "Yeah I know why do you think I didn't come back to camp. I may be a jokester but I'm not retarded." Jello leaned in towards me and whispered into my ear "To be determined" We giggled quietly when there was more thumping on the hatch.

"Well let's lighten the mood by having a nice dinner." I suggested. Everyone nodded in agreement. Then I used some of the food we had to create a stew. After eating we all sighed in relief and satisfaction and went to sleep.
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Jason_the_hedgehog
My characters dead:jack and hyper sadly :(
My characters alive:Jason John funny thing is that there names start with j
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on May 16, 2018
dark_rose
I started watching the 100 because of this
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dark_rose
So far I'm only on episode 2 lol
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Glitterburn
Oh XD
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on February 28, 2018
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Glitterburn
Do you like it? XD
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dark_rose
I love it I finished season 4 awhile ago and I’m waiting for 5 to be on netflix!! It is my favorite tv show.
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Omg so sad!
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Glitterburn
Yeah i was actually choking while writing this I was like "Oh god... This is so terrible. i know i've made messed up stuff before but this... oh god"
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on February 14, 2018
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on February 14, 2018
Jason_the_hedgehog
Why do I have John as a prisoner?
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on February 03, 2018
Jason_the_hedgehog
How come I'm the traitor?
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on February 03, 2018
Jason_the_hedgehog
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on February 02, 2018
Orange.Soda
Wow
You made me accurate to my in-person personality, cool!
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on January 30, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Nice! :0
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Glitterburn
Nice what?
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Glitterburn
I know >:) XD
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on January 29, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
You're so evil XD
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on January 29, 2018
Glitterburn
Well I'mma be honest. You are alive but you're being tortured along side Samantha and John -w-
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on January 29, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
I'm fine with that I really like how I die at times in stories X3
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on January 29, 2018
Glitterburn
Because you might be dead?
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on January 29, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Of course not why would I be? :3
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on January 29, 2018
Glitterburn
Oh yeah X3 I didn't like it at first so I made some changes -w- but you aren't upset?
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on January 29, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
That I love the status you made
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
You got my title card right X3
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Glitterburn
XD jk
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Glitterburn
WHyzat?
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on January 29, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Lol I thought you got mad XD
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Glitterburn
I'm glad i can do something right T-T
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Omg the way I tried to stop them from killing Samantha really shows my character irl O_O
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Glitterburn
Yeah. Also what do you think of the cliff hanger? What do you think will happen X3
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Glitterburn
Yeah two deaths in one chapter But there is a chance of survival for Samantha lol. But yeah. If I went by the show it'd be like ten character deaths a chapter XD
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on January 28, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Yeah it was very shocking that they killed her X3
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Glitterburn
Theorizing is hard to master lol XD but was it a good cliff hanger X3
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on January 28, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Oh my bad I'm not really good at this XD
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Glitterburn
Well I mean the chair was already knocked down. That's kinda the end lol XD
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Oh uh maybe I save Samantha before the chair goes down XD
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Is it okay if you change my crush to Jason? I know him more than the others and because I want me to like boys like irl to match me its fine if you put a girl having a crush on me its only the crush for me thats bothering me a also the new chapters are great!
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Glitterburn
Aight I told everyone to tell me if they were okay with it. Simple. I just odn't know much about everyone so I used a random generator lol
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
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Glitterburn
Yeah basically you Birds, and Pheonix find Samantha stabbing Seg and the dead body of Hyper (Since he had the most votes)
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on January 28, 2018
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Oh okay I'm glad I didn't upset you and that's cool can't wait to read it XD
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Glitterburn
Why would I be upset. I need the opinions of the people in my story XD by the way you are the character it's following in Chapter Three
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Oh okay lol sorry if I upsetted you
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dark_rose
I don't want to die :( my friend likes the part about her thanks
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on January 26, 2018
dark_rose
If you wanted a name My friend in chapter 1. It could be Madeline
-Abby
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dark_rose
Ya that would be good my friend read the chapter and liked it
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on January 27, 2018
Glitterburn
Hm would you be okay with me adding Madeline as a supporting character?
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on January 25, 2018
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on January 25, 2018
Jason_the_hedgehog
I think this is the 1st time ttime me and yameilette have been emerys
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Glitterburn
Oh dang XD
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on January 24, 2018
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on January 24, 2018
dark_rose
You got my gender right to
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on January 24, 2018
ThreeBirds
Thanks, I can’t wait for the rest of the story!
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ThreeBirds
Oof, it seems Birds is nothing like me—
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Glitterburn
Well I'm just basing things off of character and well it was a misunderstanding plus if you were raised on the Ark (Well... any of us) We'd be like this XD
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on January 24, 2018
dark_rose
This is great I love it so far
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dark_rose
My story is great
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Glitterburn
I'm glad you like it X3
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Yamilettethehedgehog101
Nice I love my story! :D
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Glitterburn
Thanks XD honestly I spent the most time on yours cause I was like "K... there needs to be some drama... How about... this. yeah that's good... no no no... Let's make her connected to one of the other characters... yeah perfect" and bam there is your story XD
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Jason_the_hedgehog
If you need help with this story like you ran out of ideas I can help
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Glitterburn
Awesome. I'll make sure you keep your word on that XD
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