Amnesia...

Amnesia...

A young female hedgehog named Yamilette wakes up in a strange world. Her quest is to find all her friends, keep them safe and to get home alive. Luna, Sapphire, Wolfie, Carmen, Arcane, Camille and Alexis are all close friends of Yamilette and will do anything to bring her back home saftly, even if it means risking thier own lives...

published on August 01, 2015163 reads 26 readers 32 not completed
show story details+
Chapter 3.

"Make sure you never look behind you"

???'s POV
"Camille! Are you okay?" I ask my friend. She looks up at me and nervously laughes.
"I'm fine, ! Sorry, I just kinda...tripped" I helped her up shaking my head. Camille can be clumsy when she wants to be. She had light purple fur and bright yellow eyes. She wore a deep red top with a back jacket, black matching trouses which look great with her red running shoes with the black stripe. I noticed Camille was searching for what ever she tripped on. She found it and smiles.
"I guess I tripped on this book. Why would a book be in here? Theres no bookshelves around..." I shrug and take the book off her and scan the pages until I see a note.
"A note!" I state holding up for Camille to see.
"Read it out!" I nod and begin to read the note.

"Hello fellow players! I bet you two are wondering where you are but hey, let me help you with this peom I wrote!

Monsters lurk all around
Searching for flesh and blood
Until a victem can be found
You must get out of this neighbour hood
Do not stop as you will die
You must fight these to beasts escape
Make sure you never look behind you
As this is the number 1 mistake.

Did you guess where you are? I also wish to tell you that there are other players scattered around the area so if I were you, i'd want to find them alive."

"What is that even suppost to mean?!" I scoff. Camille just shrugs and shakes her head.
"I'm not sure, but we have to be careful!"

Yamilette's POV
Me, Luna and Sapphire were getting scared. We have been walking down here for ages and there seems to be no end to this hallway. Long hallways are always bad in horror games! Suddenly a loud hiss filled the silence and we all turned around to see a hugh moster like plant. We screamed and ran further down the hallway. We kept on running for what seems like years until we finally got to the end of the hallway...dead end.

???'s POV
We kept hearing hissing sounds the further we walked down this hallway, but it sounded faint, luckily. I looked over at my friend, Wolfie who was trying to make sense of a map. I sigh looking down at him.
"Look, Wolfie, we are not getting out of here like this, it could be worse though..."
"Hold on...hold on...I think...I almost get it, Carmen" I shake my head knowing he was no where near figuring out what the map ment. His mulitcoloured eyes scanned the ripped paper. One blue one yellow. I pet his grey fur know leaning down next to him also studying the map. The hissing was getting louder.
"Hey Wolfie, you still have that knife in the bag?"
"Yeah, why?"
"Because we are going to kick some monster butt!"
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
5.0 out of 5 from 6 users
Add story to favorites
▼Scroll down for more stories

Comments (32)

princessluna2
...
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
Report
on July 31, 2016
Report
on July 31, 2016
Obese_Doggo_boi
wut happened to me next?
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
I'm afraid we will never know, I don't think i'm going to contiue this unless everyone gets back into it again, i don't even remember where my notes for this story were XD
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
XD I like that story
reply
Report
on July 31, 2016
Obese_Doggo_boi
Then got fat and couldn't fit out the store...
jk
yeah the end.
reply
Report
on July 31, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
*Sequel* They brought Wolife back through the power of Ice cream and friendship! They they bindged on icecream till the end of time XD
reply
Report
on July 31, 2016
Obese_Doggo_boi
*Finishes the story* Then one day, Sapphire said screw it and took all her friends out to Ice cream...the end!
Oh yeah, Wolfie died if you wanted to know but that's not important
reply
Report
on July 31, 2016
Report
on July 31, 2016
Report
on July 31, 2016
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Please continue O.O
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
Oh wow...I forgot I had this story XD
reply
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Report
on June 22, 2016
Report
on June 22, 2016
Report
on June 22, 2016
DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
Report
on March 28, 2016
Noescaping
Wolfie's gone. :c
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
Report
on September 11, 2015
Report
on September 11, 2015
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Yamilette and Camille are not sisters anymore so you might have to edit the story
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
Really? What happened? But sure :3
reply
Yamilettethehedgehog101
Report
on August 04, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Okay ^.^ changed it
reply
Report
on August 04, 2015
Yamilettethehedgehog101
We had diffrent ideas
reply
Report
on August 04, 2015
Report
on August 04, 2015
Report
on August 04, 2015
Obese_Doggo_boi
Man! I died! :/
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
You may or may not have :3
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
Okay...:3
reply
Report
on August 04, 2015
Obese_Doggo_boi
I know I'm just sayin'
reply
Report
on August 04, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Huh? It never said you was
reply
Report
on August 04, 2015
Obese_Doggo_boi
Just because I'm a dog, doesn't mean I'm a burden! 3:
reply
Report
on August 04, 2015
Report
on August 04, 2015
Report
on August 04, 2015
Yamilettethehedgehog101
I love the story so much please continue :D
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
Thanks and I am :3
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
Report
on August 01, 2015
Yamilettethehedgehog101
No problem and i can't wait ;)
reply
Report
on August 01, 2015
Report
on August 01, 2015
Report
on August 01, 2015
Noescaping
I hope there's no zom-zoms here. :c
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
X3 I don't think so, no
reply
Noescaping
Yayz :3
reply
Report
on August 01, 2015
Report
on August 01, 2015
Report
on August 01, 2015