All Wrapped Up

All Wrapped Up

Kara Nuni only wants one thing for Christmas: Sesa Okomota. He's everything she's ever wanted. Too bad she takes what she wants.

published on November 01, 201777 reads 13 readers 39 completed
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Chapter 4.
Friends

Friends

Sesa strummed his guitar, writing the notes down as he did.
"Canto 34.. Not bad, if I do say so myself." He says, smiling. He had been working on this sing for years now, and he believed it would be his master piece.
Not only that, but he was a solo artist, so this had to he perfect.
It had to.

He picks up a picture of a red head and him hugging. The picture was old, and the comers were dirty with smudges and rips, but the picture itself is in good condition. The red head has green eyes and a calico tail and matching ears, while the boy had dark hair and a pair of deep, ocean blue eyes.
A tear fell and landed on the red head.

"I miss you, Bana. I... Wish you were here. I swear to God himself, when I find Patient Zero, I'll kill them with my bare hands and then you can rest in piece."
He stands up and punches the wall once, twice, a hundred times.
The pain was the only thing that felt human anymore.

His vision blurred, and he locked the door and nailed the window shut before he blacked out.

He screams, and it's one of hate, anger, loss.
Insanity.
He grabs a baseball bat and starts smashing at the wall, memories and visions of Bana the Neko flooding his mind, filling his heart to the brim with grief and regret.


(Listen to Diary if a Dead man by Five Finger Death Punch when you read this.)
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Comments (39)

XxNarwhalChanxX
Where'd you get the pic for chapter 2? I can't steal it! XD
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on November 09, 2017
TylerWay
Is it the end?
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xXEmo_KingXx
Hell no!
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TylerWay
Okay, (=ↀωↀ=)
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on November 08, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Lol watch this insane shit
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on November 08, 2017
TylerWay
YAASSSS!!! ≧(´▽`)≦
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on November 08, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Inhales*
WOOHOOO
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on November 08, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Sits on edge of seat*
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on November 08, 2017
TylerWay
A 10!!! ♬♫♪◖(●。●)◗♪♫♬
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on November 08, 2017
TylerWay
I would give it.....
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on November 08, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
1-10, how good is it?
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on November 08, 2017
TylerWay
OH! That's great! I can't wait to read more
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on November 08, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Its gonna be my first official novel! There's a lot more to it! I'm working on two chapters now!
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on November 08, 2017
TylerWay
So there will be a continuation?
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on November 08, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
It's just the beggining!
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on November 08, 2017
SierraMWay
Oh damn. Plot twist. lit
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on November 06, 2017
TylerWay
*Is shocked*
SHE BE A PRINCESS!!!
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the_sleepy_wolves
Le gasp
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TylerWay
X3 Yas!
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on November 06, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
As seen in other stories. XD
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on November 06, 2017
TylerWay
Oh well, you should never make Kara mad
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on November 06, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
A LOT of people
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on November 06, 2017
TylerWay
She is going to kill some peoples
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on November 06, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
And..?
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on November 06, 2017
TylerWay
YES I DID!!!
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on November 06, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Why thank you! Did you read the newest chapter?~
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on November 06, 2017
TylerWay
Me too @fnafan15

And bravo @xXEmo_KingXx
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on November 06, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Why, yes she is!~
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TylerWay
The song fits!
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on November 02, 2017
TylerWay
I loved it! Congratz on the drawing too!
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TylerWay
How did you make it? @xXEmo_KingXx
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TylerWay
No problem!
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on November 02, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
Why, tank chu
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on November 02, 2017
TylerWay
Well, it works, cause the picture was really nice!
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on November 02, 2017
xXEmo_KingXx
I have an app on my phone that let's me modify pictures.
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xXEmo_KingXx
Thanks!
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SierraMWay
Write more!! Plz! I'm in love with your stories! Plz write more!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Done
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SierraMWay
thank chu!
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