All Wrapped Up

All Wrapped Up

Kara Nuni only wants one thing for Christmas: Sesa Okomota. He's everything she's ever wanted. Too bad she takes what she wants.

published 21 days ago46 reads 10 readers 39 not completed
Chapter 1.
Sesa

Sesa

Kara walked the halls, blaring her earbuds as she ignored the morons around her.
Her school was located in lower Tokyo, the 'Warzone' since the virus outbreak. It was OK, but... The virus was merciless, and the people were just assholes.

This Virus, J-89 or 'Insane Jane' turned those infected with it into light haired, blue eyed people with a deeper understanding of their own existence and unlocked more than 20% of the brain, thus making them smarter and quicker.

The downside was it included dilusions and general insanity, permanent side effects because it affected the brain, not the body. If left untreated, these patients would commit acts ranging from mass suicide to mass homicides.

But thanks to an American team of botonists, they found a cure before it could do real damage. But those that were infected suffered permanent side effects from the virus, and they were given hell about it.

Kara just so happened to be Patient 0.

So yeah.
She got bullied.
A lot.

"Hey, Kara! You should've died instead of Okio!" A boy says, slamming an egg carton into her head.
She wipes it off with steady hands, quite used to this by now.
"Stop." Is all she says, and a girl trips her.
"For Atsuki, freak." She spits, venom and anger apparent.

Kara lays there, not wanting to stand up.
Standing up would mean more bullying.  
More name calling.
More hate....

"Oi, ya wankas. Leave her alone." A boy says, snarling.
Her curiosity peaks, and she just barely raises her head to look at the boy. The other kids there just walked away, and the boy walked over to her.

Strange.
He was Japanese, but he had icy blue eyes and honey/blood hair...

"Who are you?" Kara asked, standing up slowly. She hasn't seen him around...
He nods, fixing the guitar on his shoulder. "Sesa Okomota. I'm new here."

Kara stared at him.
Why was he being nice to her?
She was patient Zero...

"I'm Kara Nuni. Why are you here?" She asks, feeling...
What was she feeling?
No...
It couldn't be...

He adjusts the guitar strap, shrugging. "Cause I got kicked out of my last school..?" He replies, not caring at all.
She simply stares at him, wondering what was going through his mind.
"Well, I should go."
She shakes her head.
"Please, stay. I'm in no hurry." She says, joining him.

He shrugs it off, walking around the school. He didn't necessarily hate school, but he'd rather be at home.

"Why the bloody hell are ya following me?" He asks, spitting on the ground and turning to face her.
She shrugged.
"You stood up for me, so I thought you'd want a friend." She replies, climbing to his back and laying her head on his shoulder.

He sighed, carrying her with him on his back.
Looks like I don't have a choice... He thought, shruggingnit off and stopping at the little pond the school had. He unstrapped his guitar and strummed it a few times, playing a few notes and eventually singing a melody.

Kara listened, totally entranced.
She didn't know what an angel sounded like, but he was the most angelic being shed ever met...

Maybe...
Just maybe...
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XxNarwhalChanxX
Where'd you get the pic for chapter 2? I can't steal it! XD
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TylerWay
Is it the end?
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xXEmo_KingXx
Hell no!
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TylerWay
Okay, (=ↀωↀ=)
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xXEmo_KingXx
Lol watch this insane shit
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TylerWay
YAASSSS!!! ≧(´▽`)≦
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xXEmo_KingXx
Inhales*
WOOHOOO
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xXEmo_KingXx
Sits on edge of seat*
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14 days ago
TylerWay
A 10!!! ♬♫♪◖(●。●)◗♪♫♬
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TylerWay
I would give it.....
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xXEmo_KingXx
1-10, how good is it?
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TylerWay
OH! That's great! I can't wait to read more
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xXEmo_KingXx
Its gonna be my first official novel! There's a lot more to it! I'm working on two chapters now!
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TylerWay
So there will be a continuation?
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xXEmo_KingXx
It's just the beggining!
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pcfootball
Oh damn. Plot twist. lit
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16 days ago
TylerWay
*Is shocked*
SHE BE A PRINCESS!!!
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creepypastafan1
Le gasp
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TylerWay
X3 Yas!
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xXEmo_KingXx
As seen in other stories. XD
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16 days ago
TylerWay
Oh well, you should never make Kara mad
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xXEmo_KingXx
A LOT of people
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TylerWay
She is going to kill some peoples
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xXEmo_KingXx
And..?
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16 days ago
TylerWay
YES I DID!!!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Why thank you! Did you read the newest chapter?~
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16 days ago
TylerWay
Me too @fnafan15

And bravo @xXEmo_KingXx
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xXEmo_KingXx
Why, yes she is!~
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TylerWay
The song fits!
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20 days ago
TylerWay
I loved it! Congratz on the drawing too!
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TylerWay
How did you make it? @xXEmo_KingXx
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TylerWay
No problem!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Why, tank chu
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20 days ago
TylerWay
Well, it works, cause the picture was really nice!
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xXEmo_KingXx
I have an app on my phone that let's me modify pictures.
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xXEmo_KingXx
Thanks!
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pcfootball
Write more!! Plz! I'm in love with your stories! Plz write more!
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xXEmo_KingXx
Done
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pcfootball
thank chu!
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