the ginki

the ginki

kind of a fanasty/romance not to flashy and its pretty cool if i do say so myself

published on November 09, 201225 reads 15 readers 10 completed
Chapter 1.
the prison

the prison

nikki walked down the dark corridor. she was there again. the long, dark prison. she visited there in her dreams. theres something wrong, hes not here. she thought frantically. just as she thought this he appeared.he was sixteen, justone year older than she. his hair was white, she could never see his eyes.but she imagined them to be a deep green with iridecent gold and flecks of brown. his long slender arms could easily slip around her. protect her from the things that lurked in the prison. his long legs carried him gracefully.his name was daniel. nikki sqeacked a little when she saw him. he just pops up outta nowhere, she thought. nikki had long midnight black hair, pale translucent skin, butterscotch eyes. her lips were always rosey red. she had long gracefully legs herself. her arms were long too...her cheecks alway had a hint of red in them when she saw him.she felt safe with him so near." welcome back nikki!" he greeted."calm down daniel im here every night..." her voice drifted as she spoke.she scrutinized his face." what are you smiling for?"she asked." im about to do something reckless." in an instsant he had her in his arms.his hands rested on her tiny waist. he stared at her lips while biting his. he stared back into her eyes.while he kissed her.mikki felt as if a firecracker went off in her heart.her cheecks turned rosey and her lips burned. she was on the wall with his hands going up and down her back in her shirt. her entire body ached for more. then it was over."please excuse me nikki, i apologize" he said bashfully. " well dont" she said blantley.
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TheSoulReaper
great
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on March 03, 2013
mikycamry
read the other one plze
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on December 07, 2012
Robot
come on more!
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on December 07, 2012
Mythsandlegends
i want more!
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on November 28, 2012
yurikoneko
^-^
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on November 26, 2012
mikycamry
yes she is dreaming
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on November 26, 2012
mikycamry
hes not blind more of a cant see unless he uses his powers to help others like his girly friend
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on November 26, 2012
Nobody.07
...so she IS dreaming!! quick question, so is Daniel actually blind, or was that a metaphor thing?? "I'm sightless" ---------this is really good by the way
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on November 10, 2012
Nobody.07
You use wonderful description and word choice!! I'm likin' this Daniel! :* is Nicki dreaming??
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on November 10, 2012
Clove
This is good!
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on November 09, 2012