The Fog

The Fog

The Fog was just an urban legand for some people ,but if you were to experience it first handed you knew that everything about the fog was real and not just some old urban legand that someone made up.

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Chapter 2.

Legends are not always legends

        I woke up in a sweat and pulled my shirt up looking at my stomach. A hand print was there. It looked like it was burned in there. I felt pain where the hand print was. I was in extream pain. The pain went up and down my body. There curtain flew open and I seen the monster. I was truly horiffied at him now. Something from my dream has now became a reality. It approched me and I screamed hopeing someone ,ANYONE, would come save me from this beast ,from this monster!

        I closed my eyes I was hoping my savior would hurry up and come save me. It felt like someone was shaking my body so I opened my eyes and I seen Sho starring at me with a concerned look. I shrugged it off and laid back down. Sho left the room without a word. The nurse came in and looked at my ankle. It was quiet for a moment till the nurse decided she wanted to start a conversation with me.

"So did you hear about the person who got murdered last night."(nurse)
"Yes it was very strange."(me)
"There is also a old tale about something like this."(nurse)
"Please tell!"(me)
"Well there is a urban legend about a monster who lives in the fog. No one who has see him surrvives. They say he was once a playful pup but after his owners died he was taken into by another family. The family ,exept the little boy, abused the poor pup. One day the pup was barking at them because he had not ate anything ,and the little boy was staying with a friend that night. The owners were tired of hearing the pup so they grabbed the pup and went to the car. The pup was happy he got to ride in the car but the owners stopped the car at a forest that was far away from their home. Getting out they grabbed the pup and started to walk in the forest. After a while they came to a lake. The pup did not know how to swim so he was terrified. The owners then threw the pup into the water where he drownded to his death. What the owners didn't know was that the lake was filled with toxic waist. The pup mutated into a monster. He went after the owners and found them at the home drinking and doing drugs. The pup decided to lure them out of the house by making noises. After a while of making the noises the owners decided to see what was going on. Walking further from the house ,since they could not see because of the thick fog, they checked to see what the noises were. The pup took its chance and killed the owners. Since then the pup decided he would kill humans."(nurse)
"What about the boy?"(me)
"No one knows."(nurse)"But it is just a legend."
"But it pretty interesting."(me)
"You do have a point it is pretty interesting."(nurse)
This story really interested me. I wonder if its on the internet? I better look it up later.

        The nurse was done with my ankel and I got up to leave the room. I started to head back to my home room class when I seen my brother talking to two other guys. I seen something in my brothers hand. I could not see what it was so I walked closer. I seen that what my brother was smoking was a joint. I walked up to my brother ,who was laughing at something. I grabbed the joint he was smoking ,threw it on the ground ,stepped on it ,gave him a dirty look ,then walked away.

        Entering my home room class I felt very disappointed in my brother. Looks like I have to find a place to stay for a while. I really don't need to be around him since he doing that ,it could mess with my asthma. I can't believe my parents died and left me with him. Worst person ever to live with! He leaves at night and I never know where he goes. I get scared and I think he might never come back.

        Laying my head down on the top of the desk ,I grabbed my phone from inside of it and looked at the time 1:30. Only thirty more minutes till I have to go to work. I work at many places ,the cafe ,bakery ,clothing store ,and a bartender. I work at a cafe because it is fun and the only job that would take me at the time. Bakery because I'm a really good baker. Clothing store because it's very easy and kinda fun plus I can tell my friends all the new clothes. A bartender because my cousin owns it and we keep my age a secret ,if we get caught I have a fake ID. I have to work at the cafe today. Hopefully a lot of people won't come today.

        Looking at the time again only five minutes have passed. Time hurry up I need to leave school I don't want to be here. I keep hearing the clock. Tick-tock. Tick-tock. Tick-tock. I wish it would just shut up it is really annoying me. Five more minutes have passed looks like I need to leave. I have to get my skateboard out of my brothers car ,go home and get my uniform ,then finally I have to get the the cafe and start to work.

        Going outside of the school and to my brothers car I opened the back door ,grabbing my skateboard. Leaving the schools gate I went home to grab my uniform for work. It took about ten minutes since I took short cuts. Going in the house ,and up the stairs to my room I grabbed my uniform. Leaving the house I started going to my job.

        Arriving at my job I walked into the back entrance and into the changing room ,for the girls.  Changing into my uniform I walked out and met the baker in front of me. Nodding our heads we both went separate ways. I walked out to see people walking in and the other workers attending to them. I seen my work friends behind the counter and walked over to them. We all chatted with each other and started to work.

New Report
6:00 p.m.

"Last night a murder was found. Her face was burnt off by acid and body was clawed all over. The young girls name is Cilia James. She was walking home from work at 11:40. She had decided to take a short cut when she was murdered. Now sports with......"

        Wow that poor girl I wish her family could be okay. I started to get back to work when my brother walked in. I asked one of my friends if they could get him and I would get someone else. My brother never left the whole time I was there plus he keep starring at me. I didn't like it. I told him to leave ,but he said no that he wanted to stay. Such a pain. I only have two more hours of work left then I could leave.

The two hours are over and my brother was still there. Walking to the changing room I changed into my regular clothes and walked out the back. I seen my brother leaning against the wall and looking at me with a bright smile on his face.
"Ready to go princess?"(brother)
"No Mike I'm going home by myself."(me)
"No you're not its dangerous at night."(Mike)
"I know you are scared I might die and want to act like a good big brother ,but you can't since you're doing what you are doing."(me)
"Are you seriously talking about what happened at school?! I was just holding it for my friend!"(Mike)
"Then why did you put it in your mouth and blow it!"(I said running away from my brother)

        I made it home safely before my brother did and went up to my room locking the door. I leaned against it sliding down. I started to cry. My brother was smoking weed and lied to me about it. I heard banging on my door and my brother voice on the other side. He was telling my to let him in. His voice started to shake and I knew he was crying. Opening my room door my brother hugged me tightly. I hugged him back.

"Please do not do this I do not want you to leave me."(me)
"I will never leave you. What happened at school was a mistake."(Mike)
"We should really leave this house."(me)
"Yes ,yes we should."(Mike)
Mike and I held each other in a tight hug. I fell asleep in his arms that night and he put me in bed laying beside me.

Monday night
12:28 a.m.

A young boy was walking in the streets listening to music. His green eyes were closed and blonde hair was blowing in the wind. His baggy shirt was blowing in the wind while his pants were clinging to his body. Opening his green eyes he seen fog rolling in but was not bothered by it. As he keep walking the fog grew closer to him until he was completely covered by the fog. He was unable to see anything ,but he felt a pair of eyes glaring at him. Starting to run he still felt eyes on him. Turning around he seen nothing but the fog. Turning back around he seen a hideous creature in front of him. The boy fell to the ground as the creature approached him. The boy felt something by his hand and picked it up. Swinging it at the creature he hit the creature in the face causing the creature to grow angry. The young boys breathing grew heavy and he blacked out not knowing if the creature killed him or left him there. He was still terrified.
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