The Immortals (1)

The Immortals (1)

Four Immortals have to fight that of a god. However with each people species past, this could prove to be a challenge.

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Chapter 4.

One hell of a war

The God stood at the door smiling. Vaslet seemed to be the only one who knew what was going on. "Well well well, nice to know Vaslet remembers the one who got away...Remember the name Zeston Raiden?"
"Wait..." Raiden started to think.
Vaslet punched him in the face. "THE GOD ZESTON, GOD OF ALL DESTRUCTIVE!"
Raiden was pissed off from the punch but was hit by realization. "Oh shit..."
"CAN SOMEONE EXPLAIN THIS PLEASE?" Marissa yelled at the guys.
"The god of destruction Zeston, the one me and Raiden hunted for 200 years on end" Vaslet looked at the god and then at the spark. "He's trying to steal the spark!"
"Oh my Vaslet you are such a card, oh I'm going to enjoy killing you boy" Zeston said. He drew a large sword from his side. The sword had a 6 foot blade and suddenly darkened. The god himself wore black steel plated armor, with no helmet. His eyes wear black as was his spiky hair. He was easily 10 foot tall and was able to wield the sword in one hand with ease.
"Kill me? Kill me? Please, age can't kill me, armies haven't killed me, Raiden could never kill me. You may be a god, though a blade can strike me down, I will remain strong and never break under your pressure. I can die here but I'm taking you with me" Vaslet said boldly, summoning his greatsword. The 6 foot long blade lite up with fire.
"Bold Vaslet...Bold" Zeston laughed. "But alone you stand no chance"
"We'll see" Vaslet said coldly. He gripped his sword with two hands. He then made a move to the God. He took one mighty swing with his great sword, the flames of his sword blowing in the wind. Zeston swiftly swung his blade too, faster and with more force than Vaslet. Their blades met with a loud clang. The flames of Vaslet blade grew bigger, and the God's sword grew darker. Despite the force and speed of the god, Vaslet still remained in the stand still. Everyone was surprised.
"He swung that so much faster!" Collette pointed out.
"And with a lot more force, he's not even trying yet too" Raiden added.
"How is Vaslet holding that?" Marissa finally added.
Raiden looked at Vaslet. Vaslet had his feet planted to the floor perfectly, he had his blade in both hands, he had a small amount of armor. "He's perfectly placed, he handling of the sword is steady and his lack of armor makes him faster. I don't how long he can do it all for" It seemed Zeston had also noticed all of this. He gripped his blade in both hands, he pushed his upper body forward, towering over Vaslet. Vaslet's only advantage was the small speed he had gained. But where could that get him? The pressure wasn't bothering him, he remained composed. However his sword...It was slowly cracking. Raiden's eye widened, the sword had been through thick and thin and never even been scratched. "Vaslet I'm coming!" Raiden yelled, summoning a spear and a large greatshield. Zeston heard and looked over, Raiden was making a head on charge with his shield up and his spear forward. Vaslet saw the destruction and slid his blade down Zeston's. Raiden sent his spear right for Zeston. Who literally pulled a second sword from the ground, out of nowhere, and slashed upwards. This slashed Raiden's spear in two, and his greatshield did so too. Raiden stood there with no weapons now. Vaslet was on the other side of the God, who was pointing a sword at both of them.
"Well I wanted to play fair but now" Zeston built a dark ball by his chest. It sent out a large dark explosion all around. Vaslet and Raiden took it to the face and both went flying back.
Vaslet hit a pillar, which fell on him. Trapping his legs. "OH COME ON! AGAIN!"
Raiden was sent into a wall, and got stuck. "Argh...What was that power?" He could feel his legs what so ever.
"Marissa? Stand with me here?" Collette asked Marissa.
"Oh hell yeah" Marissa nodded, drawing he rapier. Collette was weaponless so she summoned some scimitars from the ground. They both poised themselves.
Zeston however, just laughed. "Girls please...The two people who where hunting me for 200 years give or take couldn't beat me. They are also considered the strongest team ever...What makes you think you guys can beat me?"
Marissa and Collette looked at each other. Nodding them both said. "Lets kick his ass" They both ran at Zeston. One behind the other, Marissa leading. She made a lung for the God, who merely moved back. However after the lung she ducked. Collette jumped off her back and spun in the air. Zeston then had to move his right hand sword up, blocking the swift movement. Collette landed on the ground and sent both he scimitars toward Zeston. Who then again blocked but help the attack in place. But this lead to Marissa taking advantage of that. She made a thrust for the gods leg. It went right through and he staggered back as she pulled it out. The girls back off and smile at one another.
Zeston was pissed. "HOW DARE YOU?" He hovered above the ground and went at them.
Vaslet was slowly pushing the pillar off his legs. "COME ON!"
Raiden still couldn't move his legs. "Girls run!"
"F*CK...THAT!" Collette yelled and running at Zeston. She sent her blades up as he sent his down. The blades smashed together but...Collette's smashed right away. But Marissa tackled her out the way. But they were caught by a small dark explosion from the swords hitting the floor. This sent them flying towards Raiden.
"Now, are we done?" Zeston asked slowly walking to the spark.
"HEY DICKHEAD!" Vaslet yelled. Zeston looked over as did the others. All their eyes widened. Vaslet was stood there, holding the pillar with two hand, it was just thin enough to get his hands around and use it like a sword. The pillar was 8 foot tall, and he was just using it like a two handed sword. "Marissa tell the queen what is going on, Collette heal Raiden get him back in this and do the same, RAIDEN! GET UP AND FIGHT ALONG SIDE ME!" Vaslet ran at Zeston, and soon they were trading blows, sword to pillar, which was extremely strong for what it was.
"On it!" Marissa yelled while running out.
"Oh my god...Errrm erm on it!" Collette said still stunned by Vaslet's act. She ran over to Raiden and pulled him off the wall.
"What a show off" Raiden said as Collette started to summon water, wrapping it around his legs. It started to glow and Raiden could feel his legs soon after. "You Water people amaze me" Raiden stood up. Collette too. But she said nothing ran off and out the room. Vaslet was still trading blows with Zeston, who soon sent one powerful swing downwards. Vaslet couldn't block it and dived out the way. He rolled and stood up. Raiden walked over.
"One last fight?" Raiden asked.
"For old time sake" Vaslet said. Vaslet summoned a Katana from the ground and soon after and smaller Katana came up. He held both, one in each hand. Raiden summon a large greatshield and a longsword from the spark itself. They came down as lightning blots and struck in his hands forming the weapons.
"We stand together" Raiden said.
"As one army" Vaslet followed.
"We won't be the ones to break" The both said. Their weapons spark and ignited. Raiden's greatshield went up in flames, and his sword started sparking. Vaslet's large Katana ignited in flames and his smaller one started to spark as well. "Together we stand, together we fight...Together..." They both looked at one another.
Vaslet nodded at Raiden.
Raiden nodded at Vaslet.
"We fall..."
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sapphirethehedgehog
*bungee jumps off of the cliff hanger* Weeeeeeeee~
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SpinnerFTW
-Holds up a sign with a 6 on it-
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sapphirethehedgehog
*bows* XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
God damn it! the cliff hangers! *cuts saftey net and jumps off* XD
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SpinnerFTW
Idk weather to make these chapters like 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000 words long just to stop this.
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sapphirethehedgehog
*waves* X3
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SpinnerFTW
K byyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyye XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
^.^ heehee *lands at the bottom of the cliff* i don't mind, it's nice down here :3
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Weiss_Schnee
Sometimes I feel like Collette is the most hated....
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SpinnerFTW
I swear every time I write a story and it's not 100% perfect to you. Because you charterer doesn't have enough scenes of losses one fight. You moan. It's easy just to kill them off. It only take a chapter.
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SpinnerFTW
No no no it's fine. Just say if you want me to just get rid of the story or you charterer. Coz I'll only write another just loose a part. Don't take it back. If you feel that way go for it. Idc.
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Weiss_Schnee
......
I take back what I said!
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SpinnerFTW
How? She isn't. Collette and Marissa just haven't had much shown about them because it has been based around Vaslet and Raiden. Mainly Vaslet. You don't what's to come.
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sapphirethehedgehog
*bounces on the safety net* ^.^ heehee
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sapphirethehedgehog
Plus, end of the forth chapter is full of feels :-O
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SpinnerFTW
Ikr?
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sapphirethehedgehog
Andddd another cliffhanger *falls again*
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SpinnerFTW
God dam it Sapphire!
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sapphirethehedgehog
X3 heehee
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sapphirethehedgehog
*falls off the cliffhanger* heehee, great story!!!
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Sevas_Ren
I swear, I'm already loving it!
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SpinnerFTW
Glad so.
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SpinnerFTW
Haha thanks.
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Sevas_Ren
It deserve really five stars and two thumbs-up.???????
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Weiss_Schnee
... don't tell me you just instantly killed me off.
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SpinnerFTW
Are you dead?
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SpinnerFTW
Clearly didn't read the description.
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on May 08, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
Yeah I get the feeling I might....
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SpinnerFTW
"Tried to block it"*
ALMOST, CLIFFHANGER.
So no I did not instantly kill you off. Coz you are alive.
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Weiss_Schnee
You left it on a cliffhanger where they almost killed me.
And "tried to dodge it"?
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