The Immortals (1)

The Immortals (1)

Four Immortals have to fight that of a god. However with each people species past, this could prove to be a challenge.

published on May 0635 reads 9 readers 30 not completed
Chapter 1.

The blades colide

In the Lightning city. A high tech city, sat upon clouds. A girl aged about 20 was sneaking around in the castle of Spark. She was wearing completely black leather armor, for maximum stealth efficiency. She was moving along the dark walls of the castle. It being night time the lights were off and there was very few guards. She had made her way into a camera room. With one guard sat there. He turned hearing the door open. She sent a ice ray at him. It froze him on the spot. She remain composed and walked to the computer. She started playing around with some buttons on the keypad. "Lets see...Red hair, toned, tallish, male...Where you at?" She was flicking through the cameras. That was until she came across one. There was a man, red hair, fairly toned in muscle and tallish. He was knelt down as his ankles where shackled to the floor, arms up and chained, the chains where long and attached to the wall. The room was open with lots of ballistas around him. He had no top on, however he had spiky, black, bloodstained metal gauntlets and legging on. "There you are. Vaslet the Bloodied blade"
"You touch another button and you're done" Another female voice said. "State name and you business girl!"
The first girl turned around. "Oh why I'm Marissa a FrozenStorm, I suggest you leave me to my business lady..."
"Oh my what tone" The other girl came out of the shadows. "See if you are who you say you are, I'm here to stop you"
"Can I get the name of the person who is to stop me?" Marissa said to the other girl.
"I am Collette. A WaterDancer" She stepped forward still keeping a distance. She was wearing leather armor too, hers however have white and blue stripes and patches here and there, she also had a metal shoulder guard. "Now step away and I'll let you g-"
Marissa press a little blue button on the keypad. "Opps"
"NO!"

In the room, where Vaslet was, the chains slowly loosen on his wrists and his shackles came undone. An alarm started to go off, blink red lights were shining. Vaslet despite knowing the risks, stood up. He looked at each off his arms, he smiled. He yanked his arms inwards with enough force to simply break the chains of the walls. The ballitas pointed right at him. He smiled again and legged it for the closing metal door in front of him. The ballitas started firing. Vaslet just dived forward and dodged a few, the rest just couldn't get the aim on him. However the door closed. "DAM IT!" Marissa yelled seeing it.
"Well guess you can't beat maximum security" Collette laughed. However Vaslet kept running. He set ablaze and just exploded right through the door. Vaslet ran down the hallway, trying to find a way out.
Marissa stood there and watched. Collette grabbed her by the neck and slammed her on the keypad. "Do you know what you have done?"
"Yeah...Freed an innocent man" She said coldly.
"He killed the king of Spark"
"Did I?" Vaslet said from behind them. "Sorry I was just passing by and heard something about a king"
Collette let go of Marissa and looked at Vaslet, a small hint of fear was in her eyes. "You...Why did you do it?"
"I didn't...Now, let the Storm girl go and we have nothing to settle" He said sharply.
"Make me" Collette said in response.
"Gladly" Vaslet slowly walked in. Collette drew two scimitars, spinning them and holding them upright. Vaslet's fists ignited with fire. That was until a bolt of lightning struck him on the back. Staggering slightly he stood upright again. "You highness" Vaslet said.
"Vaslet. How did you get out?" A cold voice said behind him.
"Raiden my friend. If I knew, I wouldn't be here, I'd be a long way away"
"Yeah well I'm ganna put you back"
"I didn't kill your farther" Vaslet turned looking Raiden, the prince, in the eyes.
"Bullshit, you're dying today" Raiden drew a long sword from his side.
"Don't make me fight you" Vaslet said.
"I have your back your highness!" Collette said walking over.
"Grrr! If that's how this is going to be!" Vaslet opened his palm, a small fire pit formed. A large blade came from the ground. It started small but got bigger and bigger. Until he finally pick it up, it was a large, 6 foot long bladed sword. "By this you fall today"
"VASLET! DON'T" Marissa yelled over, drawing a rapier.
"IF THIS IS HOW YOU WANT IT RAIDEN, HAVE IT!" Vaslet ran at Raiden. Who raised his shield. Marissa ran at Collette, thrusting he blade towards her. Collette turned and tried to block it...
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sapphirethehedgehog
*bungee jumps off of the cliff hanger* Weeeeeeeee~
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SpinnerFTW
-Holds up a sign with a 6 on it-
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sapphirethehedgehog
*bows* XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
God damn it! the cliff hangers! *cuts saftey net and jumps off* XD
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SpinnerFTW
Idk weather to make these chapters like 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000 words long just to stop this.
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sapphirethehedgehog
*waves* X3
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SpinnerFTW
K byyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyye XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
^.^ heehee *lands at the bottom of the cliff* i don't mind, it's nice down here :3
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Lady_Artemis
Sometimes I feel like Collette is the most hated....
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SpinnerFTW
I swear every time I write a story and it's not 100% perfect to you. Because you charterer doesn't have enough scenes of losses one fight. You moan. It's easy just to kill them off. It only take a chapter.
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SpinnerFTW
No no no it's fine. Just say if you want me to just get rid of the story or you charterer. Coz I'll only write another just loose a part. Don't take it back. If you feel that way go for it. Idc.
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Lady_Artemis
......
I take back what I said!
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SpinnerFTW
How? She isn't. Collette and Marissa just haven't had much shown about them because it has been based around Vaslet and Raiden. Mainly Vaslet. You don't what's to come.
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sapphirethehedgehog
*bounces on the safety net* ^.^ heehee
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sapphirethehedgehog
Plus, end of the forth chapter is full of feels
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SpinnerFTW
Ikr?
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sapphirethehedgehog
Andddd another cliffhanger *falls again*
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SpinnerFTW
God dam it Sapphire!
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sapphirethehedgehog
X3 heehee
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sapphirethehedgehog
*falls off the cliffhanger* heehee, great story!!!
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Helldiver_Demon
I swear, I'm already loving it!
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SpinnerFTW
Glad so.
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SpinnerFTW
Haha thanks.
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Helldiver_Demon
It deserve really five stars and two thumbs-up.πŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸ‘πŸ‘
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Lady_Artemis
... don't tell me you just instantly killed me off.
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SpinnerFTW
Are you dead?
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SpinnerFTW
Clearly didn't read the description.
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Lady_Artemis
Yeah I get the feeling I might....
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SpinnerFTW
"Tried to block it"*
ALMOST, CLIFFHANGER.
So no I did not instantly kill you off. Coz you are alive.
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Lady_Artemis
You left it on a cliffhanger where they almost killed me.
And "tried to dodge it"?
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