May McDonald's Tale

May McDonald is a sweet, intelligent, and caring vegetarian girl who lives in a quaint stone cottage in Scotland. She has one deaf brother named Leo Peter, some chickens, five cats, two dogs, and some mice. But when May's OCD takes a form that threatens her well-being, and Leo's deafness causes him to shut down and stay in his room, May is forced to deal with this new stress - and the way she chooses is memorable. NOTE: This was one of the first stories I wrote on Qfeast, so I did this when I was 11. That's why it's not that good of a story. I just wanted to publish it, though, because eh, some parts (SOME PARTS, not ALL PARTS) are well written, and you guys can all have a good laugh about how bad it is.

published on March 08, 201613 reads 5 readers 1 not completed
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Chapter 5.

Threat

It was on that very morning that my OCD, something I had never considered more that a minor disability, acted up. I was just brushing myself off, tears streaming down my face, and running to put on hand sanitizer when I felt strange. It wasn't really nausea, but it was similar. My stomach was churning, and without thinking, I turned around and went into my room. I didn't even need to look while grabbing my colored pencils and sharpener. I sat at my desk and began sharpening.
It started out mildly, but quickly turned to feverishly sharpening, not caring about the four blisters on my hands. I sharpened until my fingers were raw, but there were still ten more pencils to go. I continued sharpening until I felt strong hands on my shoulders. In my desk mirror I caught a glimpse of my mom carrying me to my bed and lying me down; this was followed by her gently placing bandaids on my blisters and a wet cloth on my forehead. I vaguely remember crying out for my parents to take off my clothes, because they needed to be taken off before bed.
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