A Boy called Lucius

A Boy called Lucius

This is a true story about a boy in my class last year,who was very quiet and strange and got in trouble with the teachers and who I fell in love with. I hope you like it =D

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Chapter 2.
Jamie

Jamie

The whole "Lucius" thing died down, but I dident in my world. He started getting in trouble for all sorts of stuff, late homework, fights, everything. But he still treated me like the first day we met. Honestly, I thought he would leave me, as you can realize I'm not the prettiest or the one that gets all the boys. However, he dident, but we weren't official until I asked him if we were, you know, "together." It dident go exactly like that, I mumbled and played with my hair and said the wrong thing- until he said yes.

YES! Yes....That word he said, and nothing more. It was 1 whole year we had been together at the time. He dident need to say always, because I hoped that's what it would be. It wasent very long until some of the girls started to get annoyed at me for being with the hottest boy in school. At first they just mumbled words, then they started to say it to my face; but always when Lucius wasn't around. I hated when he was off school, I felt empty, but I would manage.

There were some boys, who have now "Noticed" me, per say. Maybe its because I looked better with Lucius, witch wouldn't be a surprise; he was like a model. A boy called Jamie was with one of the girls, Emily. Emily was one of the meanest, but apparently loved Jamie, but I didn't believe it for a second. I know what love is, and it wasent THAT. I'm getting of track. Anyway, he started looking at me and smiling, witch made me feel uncomfortable. I was too shy to tell him, or Lucius. Then, one day when Lucius was absent, that's something I could tell Lucius, but I know it would be over.

So, we had to read some Charles Dickens, and I was really enjoying it, but you couldn't read something like Charles Dickson's in our school without getting killed, so I locked myself in the bathroom. Somebody knocked on the door, and I jumped. "Taken." I said.
"No! Its me, Jamie!"
"Your in the girls, you muppet!"
"Just come out then and I wont be in the girls any longer!"
"Fine." I shoved the book in my bag and opened the door. "What?" I said impatiently, hoping he would be offended and leave.
"I need...Advice,"
"OK then. Why come to me? Ask your prissy Emily," I dident realize I just said that, but he dident seem to mind.
"I cant believe I'm saying this...How do I stay away from you?"
I stared. "What?! Ok, I'm a little uncomfortable."
"You heard me, how?" he said softly, and put his arms around my waist. I pushed him away, and kicked him where the sun dont shine, just encase he came at me again.
"Wait!" He said, as I ran away. I ran all the way to the yard, all the way to the back of reception and stayed there. I wanted to leave, but for some reason, I felt like that wasent as bad as I made it. It wasent bad...It was good. I had to get my head straight on what I was thinking. Emily would kill me. Jamie would keep coming after me. And Lucius would feel betrayed. When he did say "Yes" to ask if were together, maybe he dident mean always, maybe he just meant "For now." Because that's what it looks like its heading towards.
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Celest_Stories
WRITE MORE I <3 LOVE STORIES
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on November 27, 2013
Foxface22
Great story!
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on June 03, 2013
harry12345678
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on January 25, 2013
harry12345678
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on January 25, 2013
harry12345678
crig
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on January 25, 2013
DogDogDog
I havent had time to write it, but I will get it done soon :3
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on December 25, 2012
purplepony3
Is there any more?
No?
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on December 18, 2012
Mathguy
cool
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on December 07, 2012
Nobody.07
ahhh, that's so sweet :3
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on November 10, 2012
DogDogDog
Thanks for the comment Clove, and HA HA CatoandClove, super funny :D
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on November 06, 2012
ARTPOP
Lucius Malfoy?
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on November 06, 2012
Clove
I really like this :D keep going
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on November 05, 2012