Dog stories

Dog stories

I come up with lots of short stories and here are the doggiest ones. Lots of them are funny Some are sad but i swear they are great.

published on February 20, 201379 reads 49 readers 22 not completed
Chapter 1.
Dog sitter

Dog sitter

It was just 3 months ago when my owners went out for a valentines dinner.
They usually left me with a relative or friend but they called Mary Anne instead.
Mary Anne had looked after Rusty the Collie down the road before and he was sent to bed at eight O clock.
Imagine! Eight o clock!
Well she turned up 2 hours early and was even more uglier than i expected.
Rusty said she had braces but these were huge big black things!
Rusty said he had scraggly hair and monstrous eyebrows and she did.
Rusty said she was awfully plumy and she was.
I thought Rusty was speaking rubbish again but he was not.
Well when my masters left she went out to her car and came back with a trunk.
She started lifting out little outfits and hats but the worst one was the one she picked.
It was PINK!
She put me in the horrid suede jacket and said "Oh I love little girlies!"
This was too far so i bit her.
It was not a big chomp just a nip but if you see a little poodle with a muzzle and thick lead ,you will know the story.
                                                                               THE END!
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Comments (22)

Kat2005
Cool ideas!
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on August 10
IA15279
WOW! I LOVE IT!
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on July 09
sienna1rules
its ok
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on July 22, 2015
Avienexjel
'Tis okay good...
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on July 17, 2014
mojoraley
great storie
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on July 17, 2014
xKearax
Wow, I wish I could change it to 5 stars, excellent : )
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on March 03, 2013
xKearax
yeah i dont mean you need to make them longer, just improve them a little, or make more which you're probably doing right now
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on February 23, 2013
kellygirl2
i know i have 2 make em short
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on February 23, 2013
xKearax
take it or leave it Liffey, you're not always gonna get "Oh Liffey! This is perfect! I know a professional
publisher!" so build up your work because your stories are good, but you've written better
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on February 22, 2013
kellygirl2
sigh
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on February 22, 2013
xKearax
you can, liffey, you've left things on my stories that I'll never forgive you for, so just take this and make better ones. I left what I thought, I dont wanna lie and say it's amazing, because they're just good dog stories
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on February 22, 2013
kellygirl2
still i dont tell you
YOUR STORIES ARE NOT GOOD AND THEY NEED IMPROVED.
do i?
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on February 22, 2013
xKearax
i meant
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on February 22, 2013
xKearax
it's constructive criticism, so dont be offended, you take it and improve : )
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on February 22, 2013
kellygirl2
the one about the mix breed and tricks.
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on February 22, 2013
xKearax
and yeah
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on February 22, 2013
xKearax
And I like the 2nd chapter
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on February 22, 2013
kellygirl2
but you said they were not amazing only good and if i improve them they will be great
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on February 22, 2013
xKearax
I'm not, I added it to my faves, look if you don't believe me
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on February 22, 2013
kellygirl2
you are now slagging them
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on February 22, 2013
xKearax
I like Max best
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on February 22, 2013
xKearax
okay, it's good, not amazing, improve your stories and they will be great
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on February 22, 2013