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a girl called rose has a boyfriend but then he gets sent to jail because he murdered the girls sister. and the rose is really upset. but rose wants revenge

published on February 07, 201337 reads 16 readers 8 completed
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Chapter 2.

Rose meets John again

I woke up feeling happy this morning. I eat my cereal and then watched some T.V. My sister woke up late though she said i am going to go to the super market. do you want to come? I said yes, okay. We went to the car a drove to the super market.i told Jenifer i am gonna go to Pennys and buy some cloths okay. Okay Rose no problem. I went inside and bought a bag, dresses, shirts and trousers and socks. I went to get some tea at a tea shop. After when i drunk my tea i say John again. I said hello to him and how are you? he said i am fine thanks you? i am good thanks. We talked for a long while then he said do you want to get a drink i said okay. Because my mouth was really sore from all the talking. we chat while we were sitting down. After a while my sister say me and John talking and said to John. Hey John long time no see! John replied and said Hi Jenifer how are you? I am good thanks John. i am gonna leave you two with it then okay. Okay Rose bye, bye Rose. Jenifer and John were talking longer then me and him. Any way on with the story. Rose went home.Made dinner for kisses and then walked her. Later on Jenifer came back before Rose. Jenifer opened the door and said tonight was brilliant it was really ........... Rose are you here? there was no answer. then she said Kisses come here girl. They most be out for a walk. Jenifer eat her dinner and put the fire on because it was freezing people could turn like  ice it was so cold. Jenifer feel asleep on the couch then. Jenifer had a dream then................. Hi Jenifer, o hi John how are you i am good know John took hold of Jenifer and kissed her......... Jenifer woke up and say Kisses right in front of her licking her Jenifer said stop it Kisses and then she got up and said Rose i had a really good dream. Rose said was it to do with John? Jenifer said Yes it was. Rose gave a giggle and said i am going to bed night sister. Sweet dreams Rose.

Rose then had a dream.......... HELP, HELP ANY ONE THERE?  I AM STUCK HELP!!! John thank god it is you can you help me?i am stuck. okay alright 1 2 3 Rose was free thank you John know ah!!!!!! John let me go. He tied me to a tree and then he left me all alone. Then he came back with a dead body. JENIFER JENIFER NO NO NO NO NO YOU MONSTER!!! Rose was crying then. She isn't dead she is asleep. what do you want with us?? your money and i also want to marry you. I barely know you John you do Rose. Rose went silent. Okay if you let my sister go you can marry me. and we can live happy ever after. fine then my love. wake up Jenifer know run Jenifer know we are going to live happy ever after.Rose awoke up o my god. Jenifer you still there. es what is the matter sister nothing it was just a bad dream don't worry about it sister. okay then. go back to sleep know sister you need it you have been out and about today. Night sister, Night Jenifer.
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MidnightRocks
Wow!!
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on July 26, 2014
hannah54
thanks
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on February 13, 2013
EvilAngel1490
I love this story!
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on February 11, 2013
hannah54
thanks sophie
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on February 08, 2013
SophieLovesLittleMixxx
Hannah... this story is brilliant! Well done!! :) xD from Sophie
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on February 08, 2013
hannah54
thanks kearah
:)
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on February 08, 2013
xKearax
i read chap 1, i'm saving the rest! your story is like a choco bar that I can't wait to eat, but i savour it, in other words, amazing, can't wait to read more : )
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on February 07, 2013
hannah54
Please comment on my story
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on February 07, 2013