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a girl called rose has a boyfriend but then he gets sent to jail because he murdered the girls sister. and the rose is really upset. but rose wants revenge

published on February 07, 201337 reads 16 readers 8 completed
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Chapter 3.

the death of my sister

I woke up that day and saw that Jenifer took my dog out for a walk. You are a good girl aren't you Kisses! Kisses barked and then licked her. OW that hur.......t o sorry Jenifer John hi Jenifer how are you? i am sorry as well. I am good thanks John, it is fine. You like to take Roses dog for a walk do you? ya i love it. That is good. Can i walk with you? ya sure. thanks. So how have you been John? well i am still upset about are brake up. I didn't mean to get drunk. I still love you John and i am a really bad for hurting your feelings. It is fine Jeni. You still remember! Ya of course i do. How could i forget! i have missed you Jeni i have too. I love you Jenifer, i love you too. They kissed then. Lets go Jenifer. Okay. They went into the forest and then BANG John shout Jenifer. Her wound was really bad he shout her in the arm and then went up to her and gave her  sleep gas. John phoned Rose and said your sister has been shot you need to come here fast! Rose said were is she? she is in a forest at the back of the park. Rose said okay thanks John i am on my way.

Rose came and saw Jenifer and John come on lets take her to the hospital. NO Rose. WHAT COME ON JOHN HELP ME! I SAID NO ROSE!!! then he walked up to me and said i love you but i have to  do this he came up to me and pushed me up to a tree and tied me. It was just like my dream! then he brought over my sisters body Rose said NO NO NO NO YOU MONSTER! SHE IS DEAD BECAUSE OF YOU WHY DO THIS TO HER? she isn't dead why would i kill my x girl-friend and your sister? maybe you would i don't know what you are up to but leave her out of it! okay then will you marry me I didn't say a word and then i said okay if you let her go. Fine. GET UP JENIFER. She got up. Run know Jenifer. Now we will get married. Then let me go then. He did  what i told him to do. Then he called everyone i knew and who he knew. They came and then John gave me a wedding dress it was beautiful. But i still want my revenge for what he did to my sister. The mass was on then i shouted out EVERYONE I  DON'T WANT TO MARRY THIS MANI DON'T LOVE HIM. HE WAS HURTING MY SISTER SO WE COULD GET TOGETHER BUT I DON'T WANT TO MARRY HIM. Everyone was silent then John said i am going to kill you Rose i would rather die then he came running up to me then a man came to stop him but it was to late. Rose was dead. All the girls screamed in fear and were crying out loud everyone phoned the police and the ambulance.

They came Rose was sent to the hospital really fast and John was put in Jail for hurting Jenifer and for hurting Rose. The man who tried to save me but he came inside the ambulance. when i woke up i saw the man looking at me and i saw gifts and flowers and cards and i also saw my dog Kisses and my sister Jenifer. They said hi  Rose then Jenifer said i am gonna get some tea okay. Then she went. Rose said who are you? the man said my name is Simon, Simon's hair was black his eyes were blue like the ocean. then he said what  is your name? i said i don't know my name. O ya i forgot to tell you, i am sorry to tell you this but you suffered from a brain damage. So everyone needs to tell you about your self so your name is Rose you are age 29 you were born in Ireland you have a sister called Jenifer you live with your sister and you have a dog called Kisses and your sister will tell you the rest. thank you Simon you are really kind. Then Rose kissed him on his check. He gave a big smile and then he left. Rose said no stay here please. Simon said okay then.
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MidnightRocks
Wow!!
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on July 26, 2014
hannah54
thanks
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on February 13, 2013
EvilAngel1490
I love this story!
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on February 11, 2013
hannah54
thanks sophie
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on February 08, 2013
SophieLovesLittleMixxx
Hannah... this story is brilliant! Well done!! :) xD from Sophie
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on February 08, 2013
hannah54
thanks kearah
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on February 08, 2013
xKearax
i read chap 1, i'm saving the rest! your story is like a choco bar that I can't wait to eat, but i savour it, in other words, amazing, can't wait to read more : )
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on February 07, 2013
hannah54
Please comment on my story
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on February 07, 2013