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a girl called rose has a boyfriend but then he gets sent to jail because he murdered the girls sister. and the rose is really upset. but rose wants revenge

published on February 07, 201337 reads 16 readers 8 completed
Chapter 1.

Rose meets someone

every story has a happy ending don't they, well this one doesn't.
one day in England a girl called Rose was walking in the park with her dog Kisses. Rose went to take off the lead so that the dog could run around for a while and play. she took the lead off and Kisses went sprinting and playing around with all the other dogs. while Rose was walking she couldn't find Kisses! she yelled out and said "kisses come her girl, come on i have a treat for you" but there was no sign of her she was missing! Rose cried and cried but then a man came up to her. He had blond hair and green eyes and wore a shirt and trousers .And he asked why were you crying? Rose replied my dog is missing and i cant find her any were. The man said i say a dog running to a house, she was white and black. O my god do you know were the house is? the man said yes i do follow me. They went running and then we found kisses, kisses was safe and sound. Rose said how can i ever repay you? the man said can you tell me your name? my name is Rose. what is yours my name is John it is nice to meet you Rose. It is nice to meet you to John. Rose said goodbye and went home.

Kisses you naughty girl i was worried, you could have died! Kisses licked Rose as a i am sorry Rose. Rose hugged her and then she said i forgive you. Rose gave Kisses water and food. Kisses finished up and went to sleep. Rose went to clean up all the plates and forks and knifes. Rose was finished. Rose went into the living room and watched T.V. Then the handle of the door opened it was her sister Jenifer. Jenifer had brown hair and purple eyes. she was really pretty. Jenifer just came back home. She was working in a hair dressing place. Jenifer said what is for dinner i am starving? Rose said it is spaghetti. Jenifer said YA! then Rose said i meet some one today. Jenifer said who was it? Rose replied it was a man he was called John. Jenifer stopped and looked at Rose. John, John! is he okay like how is he? Rose said hold on how do you know John? Me and John used to go out remember! Rose said O ya! why did he dump you again? he dumped me because i was drunk one night and i kissed someone else then. O ya you really broke his heart Jenifer he really loved you. at least you can be with him again well try to get back with him again. Ya i guess so i am gonna go to bed know Jenifer okay night. Night Rose.
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MidnightRocks
Wow!!
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on July 26, 2014
hannah54
thanks
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on February 13, 2013
EvilAngel1490
I love this story!
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on February 11, 2013
hannah54
thanks sophie
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on February 08, 2013
SophieLovesLittleMixxx
Hannah... this story is brilliant! Well done!! xD from Sophie
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on February 08, 2013
hannah54
thanks kearah
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on February 08, 2013
xKearax
i read chap 1, i'm saving the rest! your story is like a choco bar that I can't wait to eat, but i savour it, in other words, amazing, can't wait to read more : )
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on February 07, 2013
hannah54
Please comment on my story
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on February 07, 2013