Darkest Era VR

Darkest Era VR

Five friends, play a game together. A game that takes into itself. But something goes wrong and they get stuck. And know it's their life or their death.

published on October 11, 201643 reads 8 readers 17 not completed
show story details+
Chapter 4.

Note

I'm sorry for the lack of updates.
I've been all over.
My gaming side of things is taking over and I'm too busy practicing for my contest.
And work and college are a down time.
But I'm trying.
I will have more just bare with me.
More important things to be dealing with which will effect me in real life. Where as this won't.
I'm thankfull for the support and I'm trying.
Love you guys.
Peace!
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
5.0 out of 5 from 3 users
Add story to favorites
▼Scroll down for more stories▼

Comments (17)

Sevas_Ren
Too op! Too cool! Too...I don't know how to describe it!
reply
SpinnerFTW
#OverLevel
reply
Report
on October 12, 2016
Report
on October 12, 2016
Sevas_Ren
I can't wait to see the pros in action!
reply
SpinnerFTW
#BeReady
reply
Report
on October 12, 2016
Report
on October 12, 2016
Weiss_Schnee
Pffff Takamina's reaction to my user XD
reply
SpinnerFTW
Yeh
reply
Report
on October 12, 2016
Report
on October 12, 2016
sapphirethehedgehog
This is awesome, getting flashbacks to SAO though :P
reply
SpinnerFTW
Kinda the point XD
reply
sapphirethehedgehog
Ohhhhhh that would make sense
reply
Report
on October 12, 2016
Report
on October 12, 2016
Report
on October 12, 2016
tylnapp
This was a good story...not a new idea (SAO)...but also a good alternate view to a game similar...
reply
tylnapp
Though it is not an original concept, the story is very good, and its own original arc. You do characters pretty well, better than I could. I just found the new chapter, read it, and the VR story looks good thus far.
reply
tylnapp
SAO...I can see where everyone says the story isn't that great, I like it, though admittedly, it is not the best. Also, no problem.
reply
Report
on October 12, 2016
SpinnerFTW
Thank you.
Yeah I looked more into SAO btw.
It's ok i guess.
Probably not ganna copy it though XD
reply
Report
on October 12, 2016
Report
on October 12, 2016
SpinnerFTW
I am well aware SAO is similar. But i have not watched it. So it is just a similar game. And is based off alot more than the idea of SAO
reply
tylnapp
Understandable..
reply
Report
on October 11, 2016
SpinnerFTW
Ah. Sorry i didn't know. As said haven't watched it.
reply
Report
on October 11, 2016
tylnapp
Yes, I know, that is why I said it was not a new idea (As the POV with trapped VR players is similar to that of SAO), but also based upon what the technology's dangers could be when we reach that point. I do know it was also made as a different view than that of SAO, as hey start us out with a pro, early access, SAO player rather than a new group like you do.
reply
Report
on October 11, 2016
Report
on October 11, 2016
Report
on October 11, 2016