Darkest Era VR

Darkest Era VR

Five friends, play a game together. A game that takes into itself. But something goes wrong and they get stuck. And know it's their life or their death.

published on October 1139 reads 12 readers 31 not completed
Chapter 1.

Just The Start

Keda Yasashii, a young brown haired, green eyed man and his girlfriend Jackie May, we're in a line to get a brand new game. Their friend Joshua had recommend the game to them. Darkest Era VR. Jackie looked up at Keda, who was a little taller than him. "So what's it about again?"
"I don't know. Josh said it was a floor based RPG, boss fights and all that. He said the Alpha and beta were fun so" Keda said looking back at her.
"And if we hate It?" Jackie questioned.
"It's new, I'll drop the price and could sell ours in a day" Keda laughed.
The line moved forward. "That's an idea" Jackie said moving forward. She looked at her copy of the game. She could hear everyone talking about what they expected and what they planned to do.
Keda felt his phone vibrate, he took it out and answered the call. "Josh?"
"Sup dude? You guys at the store?" Josh said over the phone. He was sat at his house, putting his game in his VRP 2. He stood up and ran his hand through his spiky red hair.
"Yeah why you waiting?" Keda asked.
"Yeah, me and Takamina are ganna meet up in game and wait for you guys. Maybe grind a few levels" Josh told him.
"Aren't you leveled up already?" Keda asked him.
"Yeah but it capped at 15 soooooo yeah. Just when you get on read the guide and add, SpinnerFTW and PoisonousSugar. It's easy, then teleport to us okay?" Josh said grabbing his VR helmet.
"Alright dude" Keda said.
"Peace"
"Peace!" They hung up. "So he said we go home and add him in game"

Meanwhile Takamina was already in the game. She had just been scanned so her charater looked like her. Her short Blond hair blowing in the wind and her brown eyes scanning the place. There were lush green fields and town up ahead. She followed a brick path to the town. She heard a ding. She raised her hand, on the inside of her wrist there was a green bar, her health bar. She clicked it and holographic menu came up. Next to friends there was a number 1 there. She clicked friends and she had got a friend request from SpinnerFTW or Josh. She pressed it. Josh appeared in a blink of light behind her. Smiling he greeted her. "Hey Takamina!" There was a green bar above his head, a blue bar under that too. Next to them both on the left was a number, 15.
"What your level carries over?" She nearly shouted.
Josh backed up a bit. "Yeah..."
"Bullshit!" She started going on at him.
"Takamina! Chill!" He shouted. "It's alright, new people get a double EXP booster"
"Oh..." She calmed down.
"Let me guess! Magic?" He asked looking at her black short sleeve top and long black trousers.
"How did you know?" She questioned.
"I did too and started with the same gear" He clicked his health bar on his wrist. And started tapping away. In his inventory. With a green blink of light suddenly he was wearing a long red overcoat, with a V split at the bottom. As well as a black top and trousers.
"Edge load much?" She laughed at him.
"You wanna die?" He asked her.
"No..."

And finally. A young pink hair girl was sat on her bed. She looked at her VR helmet. Waiting to put it on. She sighed. She wanted to ask someone to play but all her friends weren't into games. And she had issues with guys. She gave her head a shake and put her helmet on. The game started loading.
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PoisonousSugar
Nice chapter :0
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SpinnerFTW
Thank you.
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PoisonousSugar
You're welcome!
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Helldiver_Demon
Too op! Too cool! Too...I don't know how to describe it!
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SpinnerFTW
#OverLevel
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Helldiver_Demon
I can't wait to see the pros in action!
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SpinnerFTW
#BeReady
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Lady_Artemis
Pffff Takamina's reaction to my user XD
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SpinnerFTW
Yeh
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sapphirethehedgehog
This is awesome, getting flashbacks to SAO though
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SpinnerFTW
Kinda the point XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Ohhhhhh that would make sense
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PoisonousSugar
Omg nice new chapter
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Lady_Artemis
Your reaction to my user though XD
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SpinnerFTW
It's ok do did I.
It's better than Silly_Spinner XD
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PoisonousSugar
Mkay I kept mine the same too I think lmao
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Lady_Artemis
Yeah really couldn't think of anything else so I just told Josh to use my Qfeast username.
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PoisonousSugar
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SpinnerFTW
Why thank you!
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PoisonousSugar
You're welcome!
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tylnapp
This was a good story...not a new idea (SAO)...but also a good alternate view to a game similar...
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tylnapp
Though it is not an original concept, the story is very good, and its own original arc. You do characters pretty well, better than I could. I just found the new chapter, read it, and the VR story looks good thus far.
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tylnapp
SAO...I can see where everyone says the story isn't that great, I like it, though admittedly, it is not the best. Also, no problem.
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SpinnerFTW
Thank you.
Yeah I looked more into SAO btw.
It's ok i guess.
Probably not ganna copy it though XD
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SpinnerFTW
I am well aware SAO is similar. But i have not watched it. So it is just a similar game. And is based off alot more than the idea of SAO
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tylnapp
Understandable..
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SpinnerFTW
Ah. Sorry i didn't know. As said haven't watched it.
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tylnapp
Yes, I know, that is why I said it was not a new idea (As the POV with trapped VR players is similar to that of SAO), but also based upon what the technology's dangers could be when we reach that point. I do know it was also made as a different view than that of SAO, as hey start us out with a pro, early access, SAO player rather than a new group like you do.
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PoisonousSugar
Omg it is great
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SpinnerFTW
Why thank you!
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PoisonousSugar
You're welcome!
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