the ginki2

the ginki2

i hope you guys like this one as much as the others. its to the part with the creepy monster called the ginki

published on January 29, 201312 reads 10 readers 10 completed
the incounter

the incounter

nikki walked closely to daneil. the beast stared around her, she was completely still, afraid if she did the beast would see her. she glanced quickly at their hands intertwined as she relived their passionete kiss. she sensed him staring at her."im sorry" was all he could say as the beast attacked. daneil threw her to the wall, as he dogded the attack.she screamed as he fought the ginki. without her seeing he withdrew an impressively huge sword he carried with ease. she couldnt speak as he jumped and with a swift flick of his wrist chopped the head off of the beast."there are more we must leave now, the an smell blood"he yelled."there are more?"she squeaked.daneil ran to her side as she fell to her knees."nikki, you are the chosen one, the one who will bring peace to this waste land, you must have known there would be those who diagree with your cause.."he said softly."what cause, i never agreed to this."

there in a flash a ginki ripped daneils head off.nikki screamed as daniels blood killed the beast and he turned to ash.she cryed for nearly five mins.blue flames appeared at his ash, as he regrew.
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mikycamry
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on February 04, 2013
yurikoneko
oh explains the typos
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on January 30, 2013
mikycamry
i did not, when i wrote this one i wrote off the top of my head...
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on January 30, 2013
yurikoneko
i dont like it please more now!! i know u already worote it
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on January 30, 2013
mikycamry
i like tokeep my readers in suspense
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on January 30, 2013
yurikoneko
moki u know i shi crazy pwease write moere
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on January 30, 2013
mikycamry
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on January 30, 2013
yurikoneko
pewaseb morejohf kljldsghdfjl sdjkg ^-^
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on January 30, 2013
mikycamry
thanks
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on January 30, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
This is real cool!
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on January 30, 2013