Dear Diary, I think I may have fallen for an EMO

Dear Diary, I think I may have fallen for an EMO

Juliet is the cheer captain and " it" girl of Verington High School. She's always been ignored by her family and uses her social status at school to fill in that gap in her life. Her friends are most of the time annoying and the only thing they really talk about is Sex. She's the only one there with the same amount of experience as a wall which means she sticks out like a pigeon in a pack of Hyaenas.thankfully they all find that " cute" and " respectable" about her. Drew is your typical Reject. He's used to being called emo so he doesn't bother correcting the true definition anymore. Some people think he's a man wh*re who players with girls hearts but that's not the case.

published on April 25, 2014275 reads 30 readers 11 completed
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Chapter 9.

The new guy

Sooooooooooo what do you guys think so far???????? Btw no Drew or Ian in this one sorry girls lol

Plz comment and vote. I won't publish anymore if I don't get any feedback :P

So here are some questions I would like answers on ASAP.

Q1: what do you guys think of Ian?

Q2: is there any changes you guys would like to make?

Q3: is it too soon for Juliet's feelings to appear?

Q4: would you like to become a important character to steepen the plot, or create a character of your own for me to toss in?

Plz comment your answers to the questions.

My friend suggested I should add a twist in the story so here it is. Hope you like :D


CHAPTER 10 THE NEW GUY


Finally last class of the day I thought.
I couldn't wait to start practice then wright in my diary about Drew...... And Kazzy......... Okay maybe just Drew, in a friendly way.

As I sat down for Biology 2 Mrs. Sixx ( hehe) was talking to a very tall figure with copper hair with red skinnys, black vans and a Asking Alexandria hoodie. He had lots of piercing on his lip, I just didn't know what to call them....*
He looked looked to be about 6'2 and when he nervously glanced around the room he had soul pearling blue eyes.
He was very slim and probably could snap in to like a twig.

( he has canine and cyber bites.)*

He was drop dead sexy.

" great another emo f*ggot" I heard Chad groan.

I looked around and noticed Brittany and Becca foaming at the mouth. Heather had forgotten her phone existed when she paused after a selfie and noticed mister hottie.
Yup.
All the girls in the class where wanting a piece of him.
Even me.
I just earlier wanted to wright about Drew in my diary, now I wanted thirty pages dedicated to mystery man.
God I sounded just like the other girls.

" good afternoon class, I'm glad most of you could join us today" she said glaring at Zoe and some other girl in the back. I was surprised they where even in here, usually they skipped school right after lunch.

" we have a new student today who will be joining us. His name is Daniel Tavern. Daniel why don't you tell your fellow students about yourself since we are ahead of the other classes and will watch a movie today anyways." Mrs. Sixx exclaimed patting his back.

He looked uncomfterable(sp?) for a split second before giving us all a cocky grin.

" As you already know my names Daniel. I'm 17 and I like post hardcore music like Escape the Fate and Pierce the Veil.
I'm a video game nerd and I know EVERYTHING about the Legend of Zelda. I also like dead space, and other cool games like that. I'm an Anime freak and if you wanna be my friend then talk to me, if not then don't. So yeah, and I'm going to sit here because I'm about to shit myself from stage fright." And with that he plopped at the empty seat next to me. I felt like I was having a pleasant heart attack if that was possible.

God the new guy smelled amazing. I could smell his Axe and I didn't relieve I was rubbing into him until I heard him chuckle giving me a cocky bad boy smile. I blushed and apologized but he kept grinding at me.

" well, what a interesting introduction mr. Tavern. We'll today you will be watching Frozen. I'm going to sit here on Facebook so please don't bother me, you know the rules." With that being said Mrs. Sixx then turned the move on and sat at her desk clicking on the mouse every so often.

Next thing I knew a note hit me on the head and Daniel chuckled.
I opened it up and smiled.

So beautiful, what's your name?

I looked at Daniel and he just smirked while pretending to watch Anna( that's her name right?) sing "Do you wanna build a snowman?"

I quickly replied throwing it back at him and mimicking his previous movement.

Juliet? Where's Romeo?

I laughed at this. Of course he would ask something like that so I put jot down a quick retort

Rome? Why where art thou Romeo you ask? He never existed!

He read it very slowly with a sly smiling before replying

Can I have your number beautiful?

I then quickly wrote it down including my address. Handing him the peace of paper he smiled at put it into his phone.
This continued for the rest of the class period and not once did i think of Drew romantically.
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emofangirl000
When I saw Motionless In White, I literally almost freaked out. I'm in school rn. <3:((
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on May 24, 2019
emofangirl000
This story is way to good.
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on May 24, 2019
malfunctioningEgoist
Oh my fffffff


I remember when i wrote this story and it sucks so much ahhhhh why do you people like it?
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on March 08, 2016
Cannibalistic.Sweets
Can u make Juliet turn emo?
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on December 04, 2015
ellotherelove
"Beautiful book that I love." - Zoe Witt, author of The Mystery Website
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on June 27, 2014
kittey
Bravo <3 my kind of story can't wait for the next book :3.
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on May 01, 2014
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
The next book is Dear Diary, I love them both
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on April 29, 2014
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
Sorry :) why don't you look up the next book???
@Gummyworm I'll try 2 tho
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on April 29, 2014
Lilipad
U have to make it longer make sure add the juicy parts it was amazing make it longer!!!!
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on April 29, 2014
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
Thanks :3 and sorry about all the cussing lol
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on April 25, 2014
EverymanHABIT
*Claps* I love it!
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on April 25, 2014