Invisible

Invisible

This is a story about a girl who has never stuck out... But maybe, just maybe, with the help of a cute guy, she can change that.

published on January 08, 20131372 reads 86 readers 206 completed
Chapter 1.

The Power of Disappearing

Everybody wishes they can be invisible sometimes.  Like the time you dropped their lunch and everyone in the cafeteria started laughing.  Or the time you said something really dumb to your crush.  We've all been there.  

Well, I've learned the power to disappear.  It's actually really simple.

Don't do anything that might bring attention to you.

Simple, easy, and effective.  If you don't do anything weird or funny, nobody will notice you.  2/3 of the population of my highschool couldn't even tell you what my first name starts with.  The other third is made up of people who know my name but couldn't care less about who I am.  I'm not on any sports teams, clubs or social networks.  The only thing I do in my spare time is read and watch movies.  I do my homework on time, I turn in my projects on time and fly under the radar.  

That's the only thing I want to be in life: invisible.  I want to hide from the embarrasment and laughter.  I want to live my life in peace and quiet.  Is that so bad?

The only problem with being invisible is that most people don't care about you.  So you can fall down in the hall, and nobody even gives you a second glance.  You could be dying and no one would notice.  

. . . Sometimes I wish I could just break out of my net of invisibility so I can just be me. . . But what if people hated me?  What if they made fun of me for who I am?

I have the power of disappearing, but maybe that should change.
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youarecool
It's awesome dear
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on June 07
bluebear0914
very good... I loved it very much.
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on September 02, 2015
MysticVolume
Omgmmmmmm i fell inlove with this story
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Bmac99
Aw thank you
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on October 12, 2014
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on October 12, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
OMG IT TOOK MY 40 WHOLE MINUTES TO FINISH THE STTTORRRRYYY! AMAAAZZZIIIINNNGGG!
me reading the story:
me: *reading -10 minutes later-
parents: get off the computer
me: *keeps reading -10 min. later See More▼
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Bmac99
Thanks haha
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on August 24, 2014
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on August 24, 2014
Bmac99
Thanks everybody
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on August 13, 2014
WinterJo
OMG I couldn't stop reading!! XD
I spent a good part of my morning just reading this,
I loved it, and you are a great writer.
Sorry for babbling....
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Bmac99
Don't apologize! Thank you!
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 13, 2014
Infinity_Wolf
SO GOOD!!
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Bmac99
Thank youuu
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 11, 2014
The.Girl.With.The.Glasses
I love it!! This is an amazing story!!!
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Bmac99
Thanks
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on October 12, 2014
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on August 01, 2014
Avienexjel
GREAT STORY AWESOME
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Bmac99
THANK YOU
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on October 12, 2014
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on July 18, 2014
JeweledOwl812
@Bmac99 Hey Bmac!! YOU GOT 1000 READS!!!!!!!!!!
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Bmac99
ARE YOU FREAKING SERIOUSSS AOSNSJSKABSOSNSJDBD OMGGGG
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JeweledOwl812
Cool! I haven't read Taking Chances yet (I think) so I'll check it out!
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on July 12, 2014
Bmac99
aw thanks. I am almost done with the next chapter of taking chances.
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on July 12, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Yep! I re-read it for u
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on July 12, 2014
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on July 11, 2014
XxlunargirlxX
(sniff) beautiful
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on July 10, 2014
Bmac99
Thanks
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on June 09, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Wow! This is amazing!
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on June 09, 2014
Bmac99
WITH ABOUT TEN MORE READS WE CAN BUMP INVISIBLE INTO 3RD PLACE. WHO IS WITH ME?
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on May 21, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Wow. There are some fan fictions, that are really long, but incredible. This is one of those. You are an amazing author.
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on May 21, 2014
Bmac99
Guys...this has almost 900 reads. Help me get to 1000? Recommend this to friends, get people interested! Seriously! I love you guys.
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on May 12, 2014
Bmac99
Taking Chances has been updated!
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on May 12, 2014
Bmac99
Yes! That would be so cool!!!!!! And you can refer then back to this site or my wattpad account which is BeatriceB99!!! Thank you!!!!!!
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on April 26, 2014
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
Okay so anyways. I'm going to start working on spreading your story now :3 sorry that I haven't started doing what I promised yet. Just been real busy. Anyways. Do you want me to create a cover for you? I mean like a lagit cover with the title and Authers name ( that would be you) ???
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on April 25, 2014
Bmac99
I would fall out of my chair if I was sitting in one.
LOOK AT HOW MANY READS THIS HAS!
Ugh, I love all of my fans
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on March 26, 2014
Bmac99
780 reads...wow...that is amazing you guys )))
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on February 27, 2014
head.cars.banging
i still love this story it should be published
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on February 22, 2014
Bmac99
TAKING CHANCES IS NOW OFFICIALLY IN PROGRESS. TWO CHAPTERS ARE UP.
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on December 16, 2013
Bmac99
AND INVISIBLE IS #3 ON THE MOST POPULAR BOOKS.
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on December 14, 2013
Bmac99
OVER 700 READS?!? THAT IS NUTS! I LOVE YOU PEOPLE
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on December 14, 2013
Bmac99
ATTENTION: INVISIBLE SPIN-OFF ANNOUNCEMENT. THE TITLE IS GOING TO BE "TAKING CHANCES."
Summary: Maria as always been a good girl, but when she starts a relationship with the sexiest, most mysterious guy in school, she may just have to change that.
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on December 14, 2013
Bmac99
I HAVE OVER 15 PEOPLE WHO HAVE SAID YES TO THE SPIN OFF!!! I WILL GET TO WRITING AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. HOPEFULLY THE FIRST CHAPTER WILL BE UP BEFORE SUNDAY. IT SEEMS LIKE A LONG TIME BUT STARTING A NEW STORY TAKES LOTS OF PLANNING. I MAY BE ABLE TO START TONIGHT, WHO KNOWS? KEEP YOUR EYES PEELED FOR A SUMMARY/SNEAK PEEK OF THE BOOK ON MY WALL. LOVE YOU ALL See More▼
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on December 10, 2013
Celestine
@peace_out what are you talking about?! your stories rock!
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on December 09, 2013
Celestine
I agree with @The_Brendan yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013
Echo101
yes 4 spin-off!
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on December 09, 2013