Bad Apple

Bad Apple

It all changed when I saw not one, but two letters on my desk at school. I was swept off into a world of shades, I danced between the tribes, and saw that there was light in the dark, and darkness in the light.

published on January 29, 201429 reads 13 readers 5 not completed
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Chapter 2.

I continue circling

I woke up to see a pure white hospital room.
"Honey! Are you alright!" My mother said. I nodded.
A doctore came into the room.
"Miss Lian, could you please lie down, we are going to do dome testing to see what your results were. Since you passed out before you could finish it. I sighed and lay down. The docter got out a shot and pricked me on my right hand. I looked at my parents and saw them dissapearing into the murky darkness. i closed my eyes.
I was back in space, and surrounded by bird stars. I looked around for the grey one but I couldn't fins it, so I decided to simply walk around.
At the end of the space room I saw a tiny tiny white bird star. It looked so feeble, like it's wings were about to come off. I quikly reached out to it and it hopped into the hand. I cut the string with my fingernail and looked at it. It too grew in size , until it became the silloughet of a small hawk, like a peregrine or a kestrel. It flew up to my shoulder and cheeped.
"Good job, no w please return to where you started." I heard the voice say. I began to walk back when I heard a sound, like a cracking noise. I turned around to see a huge monster following me! It was goruesome and had a million of different sized white wings attached to it. I turned around and ran towards the other end of the space room, only to find, nothing.
"HELP! GET ME OUT!" I screamed, while punding on the space wall. I was a small light on the cieling grow brighter and birghtr, until I was swallowed up and I opened my eyes to see the blarung white walls of the hospital. I looked on my shoulder and say the small white hawk sitting their. I gasped.
"Aww! What a cute one lian! I think you made a good choice! Now what are you going to name him?" My mother said, putting her hand on my knee.
"Umm... Klepi maybe?" Both of my parents nodded.
I strechted, anxious to get out of this bed. My parents stood up and thanked the docter while I looked at my new friend. I patted it on the head and it cheeped happily.
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JeweledOwl812
THIS IS AMAZING
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on October 22, 2014
Echo101
make more chapter! I like it!
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on February 02, 2014
Xx_Pinkie_Pie_xX
Nice. You should continue!!! :D
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on February 01, 2014
Meowzilla
i like this
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on January 30, 2014
Rainbow_Bird
I used lyrics from the song to make the story. It's a weird mixture.
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on January 29, 2014