Taking Chances

Taking Chances

Maria has always been a good girl, but when she starts a relationship with the sexiest, most mysterious guy in school, she may just have to change that.

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Chapter 3.

Chapter Two

**the song for this chapter is Little Numbers by BOY.  Go ahead and start it now :)***
"I swear to God, if you don't sit still I am going to burn all of your hair off... on purpose," Lizzie threatens.  

I squirm in my chair.  "Sorry, I've just been sitting here for twelve hours," I exaggerate.  I've really only been letting Lizzie do my hair for about thirty minutes, but it still feels like an eternity.  

"There," Lizzie claps, "Done."

I look at my hair.  It fell past my shoulders in long brown waves, looking way better than it would have if I had done it myself.

"You can go ahead and thank me," Lizzie smirks as I stand up and adjust the bottom of my black tank top.

"Thank you," I tell her.

"No problem," she runs a hand through her own red hair.  She gives me a look.

"What?"  I ask.

"Nothing.  It's just, you look kind of hot," Lizzie giggles.

I roll my eyes.  

"I'm serious," she says.  "Every guy in there will be looking at you.  I doubt anyone will even offer to get me a drink."

"Lizzie, stop being stupid, you look amazing," I tell her honestly.

Lizzie had tamed her curls to lay flat, making her look older in many ways.  Her black eyeliner made her brown eyes look mysterious and sexy.  And the dress she was wearing, although it rested just above her knee, was low cut and really showed off her boobs.

I, on the other hand, was wearing a long black tank top with a white bow on the back, and dark jeans.  Not nearly as daring as Lizzie's black dress.  

"I still can't believe you're actually going!"  Lizzie squeals.  

"Me neither," I respond.  

We head back into my bed room and Lizzie grabs her clutch.

"Ready?"  She asks.

"As I'll ever be."

***Author's Note:  Hey guys!  I know this chapter is short.  Sorry bout that.  Anyway.  Be sure to comment and suggest this and Invisible to your friends.  I still can't believe how popular Invisible is.  Seriously, you guys rock.****
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MysticVolume
We want a new chapter of this! Is the one on wattpad the same story
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Bmac99
No, it's not, but it deals with vaguely some same scenarios etc. Simply put, I don't know when I can continue this story, if ever... And honestly, my writing on Watt pad is 100 times better than on here... It's more mature, written smoother, and has a better message. Sorry for any issues this may cause.
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on January 05, 2015
Bmac99
Taking Chances is on a major hold. I have another book in progress on wattpad which has a larger fan base... Sorry for the inconvenience. If you like this story then you will like the one I've been posting on wattpad. The one of wattpad is 1000 times better written and more intense... So yeah
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on September 09, 2014
ellotherelove
No offense, but if a new chapter doesn't come out I'm going to stop checking
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on September 09, 2014
Avienexjel
NIIICCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEE... :-B:)B)
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on July 18, 2014
JeweledOwl812
I love it!
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Bmac99
thanks :) I'm working on the next chapter, hopefully will be done soon
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on July 12, 2014
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on July 12, 2014
ellotherelove
Love love love it!!! Though.... On Thursday I turned nine... It's not as appropriate as I thought. Anyways.. I'm going to right this story about this girl who has these supernatural powers and can communicate with the dead... please read!
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on May 26, 2014
Bmac99
Next chapter!
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on May 13, 2014
ellotherelove
I love it!!!!! You are so good at storywriting! Hope you update soon! Please check out "pretty Girls lie"
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on May 13, 2014
madison1
Absolutely positively amazing!!!!! Good job!! thanks for adding the romance really adds something more special to it
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on May 13, 2014
Bmac99
Taking Chances has been updated!
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on May 12, 2014
Bmac99
In progress:)
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on May 11, 2014
Lilipad
Updateupdateupdate
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on May 07, 2014
Bmac99
@ILoveMusic trust me, she will regret it. Keep in mind she was intoxicated, and she was in a bad place. Within the next few chapters she will be remorseful.
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on May 04, 2014
ellotherelove
Um.. So really Maria changes herself for a guy? #BADRELATIONSHIPSTUFF
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on May 04, 2014
Lilipad
Update again I finished in 10 min add more plz dying
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on May 01, 2014
madison1
UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!!!!!! SOONSOONSOON!!!! AWESOMEAWESOMEAWESOMEAWESOME!!!!!
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on May 01, 2014
Bmac99
HA GUESS WHAT I DID? I UPDATED. NOW GO READREADREAD.
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on April 30, 2014
Bmac99
Soon!!! You won't be sorry:) it's... Steamy
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on April 30, 2014
Lilipad
When r u going to add more I am dyeing
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on April 29, 2014
Bmac99
Almost done with the next chapter!
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on April 25, 2014
Bmac99
@Star.the.wolf You like it ????
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on April 16, 2014
Bmac99
It really is my pleasure:) and I will hopefully update soon!! Love ya.
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on January 05, 2014
ActingPower13
please write more! i now check this story twice a day to see if you've updated it! thank you so much for writing these stories! :D
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on January 05, 2014
Bmac99
Thanks so much! I really love writing these stories, there will hopefully be an update soon.
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on January 04, 2014
ActingPower13
ok, let me just say, i LOVE your stories. the first one i read was invisible and i loved it so much i checked to see if you have written any more and you had so i started to read this one and it is GREAT so far!
so please please please write more!!!! you're a great writer! :D
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on January 03, 2014
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
I can't wait for the rest!!!:) Love it:)
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on December 30, 2013
Mawwy
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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on December 22, 2013
madison1
it's awesome make more :D
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on December 21, 2013
Bmac99
New chapters!!!!!
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on December 21, 2013
Bmac99
I get out of school soon, so I will be able to update more!!!
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on December 20, 2013
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