Taking Chances

Taking Chances

Maria has always been a good girl, but when she starts a relationship with the sexiest, most mysterious guy in school, she may just have to change that.

published on December 16, 2013227 reads 37 readers 44 not completed
Chapter 1.

Introductions

I've never been one to take too many risks.  Some people say I get my shyness from my half-sister Kasey, which is hard to believe because Kasey is so outgoing now.  I think I get it from not wanting to be a burden on my other half-sister, Theresa.  She took me and Kasey in when our mom was "unable."  I just don't want her to regret bringing me in.  I know she considers herself like my mother, even though I still hang out with Mom a good bit, and Theresa has her own three children to take care of besides me.  There's Chloe, who is 15,  a year younger than me.  Then there's Luke who is 12 and Cameron who is 9.  Technically they are my nieces and nephews, but they are just as annoying as regular siblings.  I still love them though.

I guess I just want to let Theresa know she made the right decision by adopting me.  I don't want her to think I'm not grateful or that I don't appreciate everything she's done.  

But in all honesty, my life is beyond boring.  I go to school, come home, do homework, hang out with the family, take a shower, go to bed, and it all repeats until the weekend when I sleep until noon then do my homework.

I guess it wouldn't be so bad to have some excitement in my life.
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MysticVolume
We want a new chapter of this! Is the one on wattpad the same story
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Bmac99
No, it's not, but it deals with vaguely some same scenarios etc. Simply put, I don't know when I can continue this story, if ever... And honestly, my writing on Watt pad is 100 times better than on here... It's more mature, written smoother, and has a better message. Sorry for any issues this may cause.
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on March 11, 2015
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on January 05, 2015
Bmac99
Taking Chances is on a major hold. I have another book in progress on wattpad which has a larger fan base... Sorry for the inconvenience. If you like this story then you will like the one I've been posting on wattpad. The one of wattpad is 1000 times better written and more intense... So yeah
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on September 09, 2014
XxlunargirlxX
No offense, but if a new chapter doesn't come out I'm going to stop checking
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on September 09, 2014
Avienexjel
NIIICCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEE...
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on July 18, 2014
JeweledOwl812
I love it!
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Bmac99
thanks I'm working on the next chapter, hopefully will be done soon
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on July 12, 2014
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on July 12, 2014
XxlunargirlxX
Love love love it!!! Though.... On Thursday I turned nine... It's not as appropriate as I thought. Anyways.. I'm going to right this story about this girl who has these supernatural powers and can communicate with the dead... please read!
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on May 26, 2014
Bmac99
Next chapter!
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on May 13, 2014
head.cars.banging
TELL WHAT HAPPEND WHEN SHE GOT HOME!!!
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on May 13, 2014
XxlunargirlxX
I love it!!!!! You are so good at storywriting! Hope you update soon! Please check out "pretty Girls lie"
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on May 13, 2014
madison1
Absolutely positively amazing!!!!! Good job!! thanks for adding the romance really adds something more special to it
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on May 13, 2014
Bmac99
Taking Chances has been updated!
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on May 12, 2014
Bmac99
In progress
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on May 11, 2014
Lilipad
Updateupdateupdate
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on May 07, 2014
Bmac99
@ILoveMusic trust me, she will regret it. Keep in mind she was intoxicated, and she was in a bad place. Within the next few chapters she will be remorseful.
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on May 04, 2014
XxlunargirlxX
Um.. So really Maria changes herself for a guy? #BADRELATIONSHIPSTUFF
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on May 04, 2014
Lilipad
Update again I finished in 10 min add more plz dying
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on May 01, 2014
madison1
UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!!!!!! SOONSOONSOON!!!! AWESOMEAWESOMEAWESOMEAWESOME!!!!!
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on May 01, 2014
head.cars.banging
*GASP!* W.O.W
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on April 30, 2014
head.cars.banging
Yah I'm trying to get to the next... GASP! *reads*
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on April 30, 2014
Bmac99
HA GUESS WHAT I DID? I UPDATED. NOW GO READREADREAD.
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on April 30, 2014
Bmac99
Soon!!! You won't be sorry it's... Steamy
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on April 30, 2014
Lilipad
When r u going to add more I am dyeing
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on April 29, 2014
Bmac99
Almost done with the next chapter!
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on April 25, 2014
Bmac99
@Star.the.wolf You like it ????
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on April 16, 2014
head.cars.banging
*tries to scroll down on the chapter selection* eh! Eh!
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on April 16, 2014
Bmac99
It really is my pleasure and I will hopefully update soon!! Love ya.
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on January 05, 2014
ActingPower13
please write more! i now check this story twice a day to see if you've updated it! thank you so much for writing these stories!
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on January 05, 2014
Bmac99
Thanks so much! I really love writing these stories, there will hopefully be an update soon.
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on January 04, 2014
ActingPower13
ok, let me just say, i LOVE your stories. the first one i read was invisible and i loved it so much i checked to see if you have written any more and you had so i started to read this one and it is GREAT so far!
so please please please write more!!!! you're a great writer!
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on January 03, 2014
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
I can't wait for the rest!!! Love it
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on December 30, 2013