Rise of the Paragon Parabolic

Rise of the Paragon Parabolic

My SAO fan fiction! This will be about my interactions throughout Sword Art Online (this will somewhat go with the story line of the show) this will be more like a journal

published on November 14, 2013106 reads 44 readers 29 not completed
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Chapter 2.

Into Uncharted Lands

We met at the outside of the boss room, as we entered we encountered  many scores of kobold adds.  After defeating them all the boss jumped down from the ceiling.  He was much bigger and stronger than he was in the beta test.  It took almost a half hour and many of us almost died, but one. his greed cost him his life, Kirito charged to his side to help him but before Kirito could do anything he despawned in his hands.  That made Kirito angry, and he flew into a rage on the boss switching with his mysterious party member who stayed hidden inside her cloak.

  After a short fight the boss was defeated, and the same annoying guy as before started yelling nonsense about how Kirito could have saved that dead guy and called him a "beater".  That's when Kirito started talking crazy too, saying no other beta tester had made it anywhere near as far as he had.  That's how I knew he had not known about me staying so close behind him in the beta test.

We all then left onto the next floor, new people and beta testers alike "this is no where near the beta test." i muttered.

next chapter: Keep Your Friends Close and Your Guild Closer
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Paraboilc
People are still reading this?
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on May 28, 2016
wherewolf
Great Job so far please continue this to the end
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Paraboilc
Sorry dude maybe I'll continue to when I get my laptop but until then it will have to wait ha-ha, its been far to long since I've updated the stories
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Paraboilc
Well here you can't update on mobile so I'm kinda stuck until I get my laptop that should be sometime in February
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on November 26, 2015
wherewolf
It won't bother me at all but I do have a laptop with me right now
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on November 26, 2015
Paraboilc
Imagine if you had been one of the ones waiting since last year xD
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on November 26, 2015
wherewolf
Lol X3
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on November 26, 2015
Paraboilc
Lol its been over a year since my last update xD
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on November 26, 2015
wherewolf
It's ok I just want to see what happens next thats all
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on November 26, 2015
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on November 26, 2015
JeweledOwl812
When did you last update this...and WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE AGAIN?!
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Paraboilc
I updated this before I went to the beach, (on June 2nd) and I will update when I get to it!
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Paraboilc
well, with scool starting on Friday, my updates will become even less often just so you know, and Qfeast's rules don't help much!
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on August 04, 2014
JeweledOwl812
You need to update moree!!
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on August 04, 2014
Paraboilc
and?
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on August 04, 2014
JeweledOwl812
That was two months ago dude -_-
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on August 04, 2014
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on August 04, 2014
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on June 02, 2014
Paraboilc
to anyone who I didn't send it to, I updated
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on June 02, 2014
edamame
I could not overlook 'Kaiaba'...
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on May 31, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Awesome story! I <3 that anime, and the laughing coffin guild has always scared me...
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Paraboilc
if I were really there, they would scare me too!
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CrystalDiamond2323
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on June 13, 2014
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on June 13, 2014
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on May 23, 2014
Paraboilc
well, it's a guild called the laughing coffins, they are a PK guild so they find various ways to kill them, from just battle to some very nasty conniving ways...
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on April 17, 2014
Nightcat
How do the coffins kill people? Cool story :)
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on April 17, 2014
Dei_Dei
I can't read the words probably.
Please add paragraphs :D
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on March 12, 2014
Paraboilc
pt?
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on January 07, 2014
Wisperton
:D i cant pt to words...
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on January 07, 2014
Paraboilc
:)
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on January 02, 2014
Celest_Stories
I like it, it seems like a cool story line
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on December 13, 2013
Paraboilc
so what do you think?
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on November 15, 2013