Songwriter's Playbook

Songwriter's Playbook

Okay well I'm going to write some songs and then you can rate and/or comment on them and then give me some idea of what you want for the next subject of the song!! Randomness is okay, just be prepared that it might be turned into a rap. Enjoy!!

published on October 09, 201317 reads 9 readers 5 not completed
Chapter 1.

The Unknown

My patience is wearing thin
I need to release this hurt, the pain I'm in (without you)
Before my heart and soul explode
Before I fall
Into the Unknown

My bones are starting to crack
Breaking me inside
Don't wanna be the one who's all alone
The loser locked inside the darkness
No-one can help me except you

                                         Chorus

So show me the way out of this hell
Don't be scared- I'll hold you hand
Take me up to heaven with your silver wings
No matter what I will not let go
Until there is nothing else
Then deep down I will descend
Will you catch me as I fall?
Into the Unknown (x3)


                                             V2

With these broken wings it's hard to soar
Feeling this pain as it pulls me underneath
Without you I cannot breath
Will you help me (x2)

                                                 Chorus
   

                                                   Bridge

Time is running out....
The darkness will descend....
We can fight it if you hold on to the end
We will be together, forever
(I promise I will never fail)


                                                    Chorus



                               Into the Unknown (x3)




  
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killedbythesketchbook
Aww thanks guys!!!
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on October 13, 2013
Writerunner
I like the first and last song.
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on October 10, 2013
Writerunner
I LOVE IT!!!
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on October 10, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Note: Be prepared for some awesome raps soon. Brace yourselves!!
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on October 09, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Copyright LunaVonKarma.
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on October 09, 2013