Dream (1)

Dream (1)

Elena A 16 Year Old Girl Who Dreams A Lot But One Day Her Dream Actually Come's True

published on September 23, 201341 reads 15 readers 7 not completed
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Chapter 4.
A New Me

A New Me

Once Sky Was Finished She Turned Me Around And Showed Me What I Looked Like My Hair Befor Was Up And Messy In A Pony Tail But Now It Was Down And Curly My Face Before Was Plan But Now I Had Purple Eye Shadow On, Pink Lip Stick, Pink Blusher And Black Mascara Before I Had Huge Black Glass's But Now I Had Natural Eye Contacts In, My Nails Had White Tips At The End She Also Dressed Me, Before The Makeover I Had A Plan Green Top On, Blue Baggy Jeans And Worn Out Black Trainers Now I Ware A Cute Vest Top With Hearts, Black Skinny Jeans And Black Cute Boots My Old Rack Sack Was Replaced With A Cute Black Hand Bag I Stared At My Self Amazed Was I Really Staring At My Self I Smiled At Sky And Thanked Her She Smiled And Said Your Welcome But Were Not Done Yet I Stared At Her Confused Why She Smiled "Because We Gotta Teach You The Does And Don't Of Being Popular And We Gotta Buy You Some New Stuff And Makeover Your Room" I Smiled I Was So Happy Then It Hit Me "Sky How Can You Aford All Of This" She Smiled And Said "I Have Not Told Any One This But The Other Popular Girls My Dad Is Rich And I Mean Rich"

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Comments (7)

Hogwarts_Huntress
Also, the spelling and grammar is just OFF
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on August 12, 2014
Hogwarts_Huntress
The picture for the first chapter looks like Harry Potter, if he were a girl
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on August 10, 2014
Avienexjel
Awful.
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ellotherelove
I know!
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on May 16, 2015
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on July 16, 2014
ellotherelove
And no periods.
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on April 19, 2014
ellotherelove
Um... This story is downright WRONG. You don't have to be popular, you just have to stand up for yourself. Also, Don't Make All The Words Like This.
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Avienexjel
Well, technically, I think the author of this story meant that the girl is completely self-conscious and not confident in general, but as for your last sentence? So incredibly True It's Ridiculous.
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on July 16, 2014
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on April 19, 2014