Dream (1)

Dream (1)

Elena A 16 Year Old Girl Who Dreams A Lot But One Day Her Dream Actually Come's True

published on September 23, 201341 reads 15 readers 7 not completed
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Chapter 3.
The Change

The Change

I Walked Into The School And Went Sight To My Locker Great It Has Been Written All Over It Loser, Loser, LOSER Why Are People So Mean I Opened My Locker And A Pink Little Not Flew Down To The Floor I Picked It Up And It Read  

Dear Elena

   I Think It's So Mean People Treat You Like This I Want To Help You By Giving You A Makeover
If You Want To Stop The Mean Meet Me At The Girls Toilets At Lunch

From: Sky

I Thought It Would Be A Prank Yet Something Told Me To Go So Later That Day When Lunch Came I Had My Lunch Then Went To The Girls Toilets Sky Was Standing There Smiling At Me I Looked Around But The Leader Jessie And The Other Girl Jasmine Was No Where To Be Seen As I Approached Her I Saw A Pretty Purple Bag Full Of Makeup I Said To Her "If This Is A Joke I Rather You Just Tell Me" She Seemed To Look Hurt By The Comment "Look Elena I May Be Apart Of The Alpha Group But I Don't Agree With The Way Jessie Works" I Smile And Nodded And With Not Another Word She Started Putting Make Up On Me

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Comments (7)

Hogwarts_Huntress
Also, the spelling and grammar is just OFF
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on August 12, 2014
Hogwarts_Huntress
The picture for the first chapter looks like Harry Potter, if he were a girl
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on August 10, 2014
Avienexjel
Awful.
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ellotherelove
I know!
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on May 16, 2015
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on July 16, 2014
ellotherelove
And no periods.
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on April 19, 2014
ellotherelove
Um... This story is downright WRONG. You don't have to be popular, you just have to stand up for yourself. Also, Don't Make All The Words Like This.
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Avienexjel
Well, technically, I think the author of this story meant that the girl is completely self-conscious and not confident in general, but as for your last sentence? So incredibly True It's Ridiculous.
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on July 16, 2014
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on April 19, 2014