Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 20131165 reads 52 readers 45 not completed
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Chapter 3.

Liam P.O.V

I stopped singing when I saw her closing her eyes. She was so beautiful but she hid it under a thick layer of clothes. I guess she wasn't confident. I knew what Louis saw in her. She had eyes that were dark but there was a small light of hope. I kissed her head and sighed. Louis came in and looked at me confused. "She wanted me to stay with her." Louis nodded before sitting on a seat next to the bed. "Liam. I need your help." Louis said. "Yeah, what is it?" "I wanna propose to Eleanor." What? Why was he bringing all this up after what happened. "Why?" I asked waiting for an answer. "I just feel that if we are together, our love might become stronger and..." "You wont start falling for Angela?" "Yeah." Louis bit his lip. "Look, I understand man but I think you should slow down a bit. Angela hates you right now. Just talk to Eleanor about your relationship. See what she says. If she and you thinks it's going well, propose to her but if she thinks there's problems, just sort them out and wait. Ok?" Louis smiled. "Thanks dad." "No problem."  Louis walked out before smiling at Angela. Angela opened her eyes as I smelled her hair. "What are you doing?" she asked, surprised. "Just wanted to check something." I smiled at her before she got up and headed to the bathroom. Her hair smelt so nice. "Liam. I need clothes." I nodded and grabbed some of my clothes before handing it to her. Wait why was I being so nice to her? "Here you go." She locked herself and I waited. She then walked out and my mouth almost dropped to the floor. She looked so good in my clothes and I couldn't help but smile. Now I understood. She was the type of girl who you couldn't stay angry at for long. She was beautiful and caring but emotional too. I decided not to hate her and forgive her. I just knew she was special. "Liam. Please look away." She shyly said. "And stop drooling." Niall laughed. I blinked and closed my mouth. She gave me a kiss on my cheek and went away. "I'm gonna get something to eat." "Oh right! I'll show you to the kitchen." There were still a few sparkles from that kiss but I shook my head to snap out of it. We both went in and saw Louis making toasts.
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Comments (45)

bluebear0914
I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
Sombra
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
zoe_williams
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
cupcake_queen33
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
THEVAMPSDEMILOVATO
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
JKRowling
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
Thehost
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
zokeina
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
zokeina
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
zokeina
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
ChokolatLover
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
zokeina
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
ChokolatLover
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
JKRowling
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
JKRowling
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
JKRowling
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
ChokolatLover
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
JKRowling
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
ChokolatLover
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
JKRowling
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
ChokolatLover
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
JKRowling
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
ChokolatLover
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
Foxface22
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
Foxface22
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
JKRowling
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
JKRowling
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
KellyClarkson
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
KellyClarkson
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
summertime
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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