Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 20131165 reads 52 readers 45 not completed
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Chapter 25.
Missing and Riddles

Missing and Riddles

Liam P.O.V
After finishing Toy Story and Toy Story 2, Harry was asleep. I smiled watching him move and whisper names in his sleep. "Angela, no! Please don't hurt her! Zayn, Liam, Louis, do something!" He whispered. Bad dream, I guess. I put in Toy Story 3 and yawned. "You monster! How could you! And you! You didn't even help her! Monsters, you're all monsters!" Harry said rather quiet loudly. I decided to wake him up before he screams. Too late. "I thought you LOVED HER!" "Harry.." "She LOVED YOU and You just let her die!" "Harry, wake u...." "I hate YOU! All of YOU!" He punched the air. "I hate YOU!" "HAROLD EDWARD STYLES, YOU WAKE UP RIGHT NOW!" He jumped before landing on the floor with a loud 'thump'. "What the h*ll man! I was sleeping." He shouted furiously. "Sorry man but you were having a bad dream. You know that you talk in your sleep?" "I do? So you must have heard everything right?" "Yeah pretty much." "Please don't tell Lou and Zayn!" "Yeah, ok." "You know how much they like her, if they find out that I like her too, they're gonna kill me!" "Wait, what?" "Umm... You said you heard the whole thing. Wait, what did you hear?" "The part where you said don't hurt her to the part where you were shouting I hate you and punching the air." "Oh.." "Wait a second, you like her!" "No, I don't!" "Harry!" "Fine, maybe I do." "I can't believe it." I said. "Yeah, me neither." We stood there just staring at the ground when my phone rang. "Hello? Yes, this is Liam..... What?! We'll be right there!" I hang up and put my jacket on. "What's happening Li?" "She's gone. Angela is gone."
Harry P.O.V
"She's gone. Angela is gone." My heart stopped. "What do you mean she's gone?" "She went missing, she's no longer in her room." "Are you sure, she's not at the cafeteria or..." "They've checked everywhere, she's gone Harry. She's gone." I stood there, shocked and confused. How? How could this happen? I went up and woke Zayn, Louis and Niall up. "Why did you wake us up?" Niall asked, a little sleepy. "What's going on?" Louis asked. "Angela... She's gone.... She's no longer in her bed... She's missing.... Angela is missing!" Zayn punched the wall which made Niall and Louis jump. "Zayn? What's wrong?" Niall asked, shaking. "It's Troy, he took her, he kidnapped her. Now I understand what he meant." "What do you mean?" "A blocked number sent me a message. It said: THE CLOCK IS TICKING AND SHE IS SLEEPING. WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN SHE WAKES UP?" "Huh?" I didn't understand. "It means that when she wakes up, he will strike." "But how did he know she was gonna wake up?" "I don't know." We got in the car and drove to the hospital. We went in her room and I noticed a sheet of paper taped to the window. I read it out loud. "The Game has finally begun. If you wish to see her again, then crack this riddle before it's too late. The sun was orange and the sky blue. It's where you first confessed, where you said I love you." "The sun was orange, the sky blue..... I love you.... Huh?" Niall looked confused and Zayn just frowned. "What?" "What's he talking about? Who confessed?" Zayn shook his head and Liam stared at a chair. "Come on guys, we don't have much time." I whined. Zayn then rushed outside. "Zayn! Where are you going?" I shouted. "I think I know where it is!" We ran, following him. He drove to a small, abandoned beach. He got out and ran to a small beach house. He came back with another note. "Zayn?" "I remembered, this is where I first told her that I loved her. Our first date was here. At the beach. Here, another note." Liam took it and read it. "Congratulations! You've cracked the riddle but this is isn't over yet. Here's another one, Drinks and chicks, my oh so perfect first kiss!" Liam raised an eyebrow. "First kiss, chicks?" "I don't get it, our first kiss was at a park. There were no drinks or chicks." Zayn said. "We'll just have to go home and figure this one out, TOGETHER."
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Comments (45)

bluebear0914
I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
Sombra
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
zoe_williams
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
cupcake_queen33
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
THEVAMPSDEMILOVATO
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
JKRowling
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
Thehost
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
zokeina
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
zokeina
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
zokeina
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
ChokolatLover
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
zokeina
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
ChokolatLover
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
JKRowling
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
JKRowling
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
JKRowling
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
ChokolatLover
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
JKRowling
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
ChokolatLover
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
JKRowling
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
ChokolatLover
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
JKRowling
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
ChokolatLover
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
Foxface22
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
Foxface22
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
JKRowling
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
JKRowling
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
KellyClarkson
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
KellyClarkson
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
summertime
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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