Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 20131165 reads 52 readers 45 not completed
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Chapter 16.
Realization

Realization

Zayn P.O.V
This is bad, really bad. Liam found the picture. I really am bad at hiding things. "Answer me!" Liam shouted. "That's photoshopped." He stood up and pushed me. "My a** it is!" "Look calm down. I can explain." "Then explain!" Sh*t. How am I gonna get out of this one. "Explain!" "I, I, uh..." "That's what I thought." His eyes darkened. I stepped back. He dropped the photo on the floor and walked closer. Before I could get out, he grabbed my shirt and punched me. My cheek started hurting. He kicked my stomach and dropped me, pain all over my body. "What's going on here?" Louis asked, shaking.  "Nothing, just teaching Zayn a lesson, after all I am daddy direction." Liam said half shouting. Louis backed away and closed the door. "Liam, forget about it. It's a picture. It doesn't prove anything." "Shut up! Where is she?" "What?" "Where is she?" He was screaming. I couldn't help but smirk. So she really did have that affect on men. "What are you smiling about? You think this is funny?" I laughed. "Where the h*ll is she?" "I don't know." "Stop lying! Where is she Malik?" "Oh Malik? I'm shaking!" "Shut the f*ck up and tell me where she is before I beat the crap out of you!" Liam was furious, just like me when I found out that she cheated on me with Troy, my best friend. Before auditioning for the X Factor, we were together. I thought we were happy. But no, she hurt me and cheated on me with him, Troy. How could she? That b*tch cheated on me. Did I not make her happy? Was she unhappy? "Tell me where she is Malik!" "I, I, I loved her Liam. She, she was my girlfriend. I would do anything for her but somehow I wasn't good enough. She left me Li, she took off with that son of a b*tch Troy." Tears blurred my vision. "She deserves everything that he's doing to her." I continued, my voice hoarse. "What is he doing to her? Huh? What's he doing?" "Angela, she was my world. I would die for her but she dumped me, she broke my heart.  She deserves this, she deserves it all!" No. This is isn't true. She doesn't deserve it. She was a young girl looking for love, she just wanted to be happy. To be treated right, to be loved for who she was. She was young. She made mistakes. She doesn't deserve this! I have to go back, I have to stop him from hurting her. "What's he doing?!" "He, he, he...." I didn't finish my sentence because I ran out. I have to stop him. "Zayn, get back here! I'm not done with you!" I ran, kicking the door open and entering my car. I have to stop him. I was about to drive off but Liam blocked me. "Move Liam!" "Not until you tell me what he's doing!" "Liam, you don't understand! I have to stop him! Move, NOW!" Liam didn't budge so I drove anyways. He saw how serious I was and got out of the way. I drove fast, not stopping at the red light. I didn't care, I have to stop him. I arrived and parked quickly. I tried opening the door but it was locked so I searched for my keys. Come on, come on. The keys dropped out of my pocket, falling down the stairs. Sh*t, I don't have time for this! I kicked the door and ran to the bedroom. Screams could be heard. No! No! I bursted I the room and saw Troy hitting her. She was crying, only wearing her underwear. "What the h*ll man?" I saw Troy. My heart filled with hate and my eyes dark, I punched him endlessly. I could her screams. I punched and kicked without stopping. I was about to give him the final blow when suddenly arms tightened around mine and stopped me. "Zayn, stop!" She softly whispered. My eyes went back to normal, realizing how badly hurt he was. I stood up and hugged her. "Angie." She sobbed on my chest as I hugged her tighter. "Shhh... Everything's fine, I'm here." She opened her eyes and pulled away. "What's wrong?" I asked. "Go away!" "Excuse me?" First she was crying in my arms and now she's telling me to go? "I said go away! This is all your fault! You told Troy where I was! I trusted you and you betrayed me!" "I see you finally got a taste of your own medicine." "What?!" "That's right. You betrayed me. I loved you and yet, you cheated on me with my best friend! I guess you finally know how it feels to be betrayed."
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Comments (45)

bluebear0914
I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
Sombra
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
zoe_williams
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
cupcake_queen33
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
THEVAMPSDEMILOVATO
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
JKRowling
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
Thehost
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
zokeina
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
zokeina
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
zokeina
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
ChokolatLover
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
zokeina
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
ChokolatLover
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
JKRowling
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
JKRowling
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
JKRowling
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
ChokolatLover
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
JKRowling
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
ChokolatLover
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
JKRowling
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
ChokolatLover
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
JKRowling
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
ChokolatLover
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
Foxface22
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
Foxface22
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
JKRowling
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
JKRowling
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
KellyClarkson
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
KellyClarkson
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
summertime
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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