April

Hi my name is April. Everyone thinks I'm perfect, but reality check, I'm not. At school I may seem like the popular girl, but at home... My dad abuses me. No one but my best friend knows. So, when I try to commit suicide... What will happen?

published on September 06, 2013205 reads 52 readers 34 not completed
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April
Chapter 4.

Dad

Crystal and I were chatting for hours. I forgot all about my dad!
He got home at 7. He came in and slammed the door behind him. Crustal and I quickly got up and looked over at him.
He looked mad for a second then smiled and said "Crystal, how you been?"
What happened to my dad? Why is he happy? Not mad? I'm not so sure of this...
"Fine, daddy!" Crystal replied to him with a hug.
His smile disappeared. And he said "good, now you can stay home and make me dinner"
"Dad, I actually just came to say hi, Mark and I already bought a nice home downtown" she said.
I just sat down and listened to their conversation. It went like this...
"Who's this Mark guy?" My dad asked Crystal angrily.
"He's been my boyfriend since the 8th grade, dad. If you cared enough for me and April, then you should pay more attention in our lives!" She yelled back. Oh no, don't get me into this!
He looked furious. I could tell what was coming next. Instead of saying something back, he just pushed her down and started beating her. He saw me trying to leave and he pushed me down and started beating me too.
We were both crying and begging for mercy when he just stopped and said "make me dinner, I'm starving"
Crystal and I were officially scared. So, we did as told. We worked together to make burgers for him. He ate then without giving us a second glance. As soon as he was done he went to the living room and fell asleep watching football.
I nodded at Crystal and we went up to my room. When I opened the door she noticed how small my room was because she whispered "April, you can't be living in a room smaller then a closet"
"Compared to what you've lived with aunt Julie, it's small to you" I whispered back.
We went in and she began to look around. First, my size twin bed. Then my "closet" which was just a box with clothes. And then my chair which was just a bunch of pillows stacked up on one another. She was now done.
"April, you need to come with me" she said looking back at my room. Should I stay or leave with Crystal?


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Gummybear14
More chapters!!
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on May 07, 2014
soccergirl01
i love this story
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on December 30, 2013
peace_out
I love it! Btw I thnk she should move in with crystal!
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on December 18, 2013
Cupecake
You leave with crystal!
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on October 28, 2013
champagne
Oh can Nway read this?? Plz
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on October 17, 2013
champagne
Gisselle really you totally need to keep on writing this story! It is incredibly good.
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on October 17, 2013
nicolecharm
This is amazing
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on October 15, 2013
Gisselle
Updated! 2 new chapters!
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on October 14, 2013
champagne
Wow u never told me you write so good! I know you write but not this good. BTW I stop tellin me u don't write good cuz u do. Oh n has Nway read this story already? If not tell er to read it. She is totally gonna love it. Not as much as I love it though.
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on October 14, 2013
Creative_Writer
I luv ur story
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on September 26, 2013
Gisselle
Thanks :)
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on September 25, 2013
The_Real_Me
Can't wait to read more! You write amazing stories!
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on September 25, 2013
Gisselle
Chapter 6 should be posted by Monday at the latest
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on September 20, 2013
Gisselle
I'm thinking of ending this soon. How many chapters do you guys think I should make it up to?
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on September 13, 2013
Gisselle
Its not the dad
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on September 11, 2013
Catarla
*Gasps* I think I know what will happen!
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on September 11, 2013
GlowingAndFading
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on September 10, 2013
directioner.horan
I think she should leave but there should be some crazy twist in the story
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on September 10, 2013
nomnommoon
LEAVE!!
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on September 09, 2013
The_Real_Me
I think she should leave but then regret it because her sister is actually a criminal and Crystal's boyfriend rapes her.
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on September 09, 2013
The_Real_Me
Cool story, my name is April!
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on September 09, 2013
Gisselle
Chapter 4 is posted!
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on September 09, 2013
ChokolatLover
:) nice story
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on September 06, 2013
Moonlight_Dreamer
It's a nice story, a little bit like another story I know but I love it! :)
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on September 06, 2013
catesonskates
Wows, this is a hit! Keep writing, this is one of the bests!
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on September 06, 2013
madix1
more more more. what happen to April's mother? what what what? please make chapter three or Nother story pwezz pwezz pwezz. I'm more desperate than another in the world!
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on September 06, 2013
Rainwhisker720
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on September 06, 2013
klovecutie03
Pwezz more 0.0
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on September 06, 2013
nomnommoon
Its called "through a little girl's eyes by xxangelxx. It's reallygood !!!
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on September 06, 2013
Bmac99
More please!
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on September 06, 2013
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