UFO Horror story

UFO Horror story

We start in a small town in Wyoming on thanksgiving , a farmer and his family were about to have the night of their life.

published on August 10, 201314 reads 11 readers 4 completed

The beginning of the end

HAPPY THANKSGIVING said the hole family Then they dug into the food, a few minutes later a loud noise fills the house.Joey grabs his shotgun. wait here!said Joey.Mike grabs his camera and follows Joey.*joey and mike go outside right out of the corner of mikes eye he sees fire*Joey!said Mike.What what!?said Joey.FIRE!!said Mike.That looks like a neon light....said Joey.Oh.said Mike*then Joey and mike see two child size figures in front of the neon light*Joey picks up some binoculars and points them at the figures**He still sees the figures but in the neon light is a craft buried in the dirt*Its a spaceship!said Joey.Lemme see!said Mike.*he takes the binoculars*OH JEEZE.said mike.Ya i know...said Joey.*3 red lines appear on joeys head*OH MY $#!%. said Mike.RUN!!!said mike.*mike runs back to the house.**Joey looks straight ahead and the figure is pointing something at him that has a blue glow**The figure pushes a certain button and it makes an eerie sound**then joey blacks out.*Comment for part 2!!!!
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MysticMedievalSamuraiPrincess
"HAPPY THANKSGIVING!" said the whole family. They dug into the food. A few minutes later, a loud noise filled the house.
"Wait here!" said Joey. Mike grabbed his camera and followed Joey outside. Right out of the corner of his eye, Mike saw fire.
"Joey!" said Mike.
"What?" said Joey.
"Fire!" said Mike. See More▼
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MysticMedievalSamuraiPrincess
I edited it for you
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on February 14, 2015
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on February 14, 2015
cryptidzoology
thanks my handwriting sucks but i like writing stories :/
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on August 12, 2013
Toriel
This was a good opening to the story!
I think to make it better though, you could maybe put " around the speech? It's sort of hard to read the story when all the words are just jumbled together! Besides that, I think your writing is fine! Keep up the good work!
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on August 10, 2013