What they said to me

What they said to me

This is based on a true story, not about me, but about one of my closest friends. It's about a girl I know being bullied. I interviewed her and everything. I am now turning into her, to write her story...http://www.qfeast.com/page/783/Stop-The-Haters

published on August 02, 2013164 reads 39 readers 39 completed
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Chapter 8.

How it ended

1st November
I have a new name now. A new dress. A new life. This is my chance to start again, to begin a new life, with my sister, and my new foster parents, Glenn and Louisa. My new name is Skye Skater, and although I love my old name, Mimi.
I made my dress for the disco. It's got a white bodice, which is embroidered with silver thread and beads in the shape of pearls. The skirt is also white, in a sort of skater style. From the each shoulder, creamy white silk comes down, and crosses in the middle. This silk continues down and meets up at the back, and ties in a bow. The creamy white colour shows off my tan, which I didn't know existed until I slipped this dress on.
On the night of the disco, I was allowed to put on a tiny bit of white eye shadow, and a little bit of pink lipstick. I wanted to put on more, but after all, I am only 9. Well, 10 soon! My black hair tumbled down my back, a few inches from my waste. I painted my nails white, which matched my white shoes, which had a teeny tiny heel.
I walked into the disco, feeling great. And guess who the first person I saw was. Cate Jacobson, in a disgusting bright pink dress, that was made of a sort of plastic, that was shiny. It was strapless, with a tiny strip of material was used as the top half, and the most mini miniskirt you've ever seen. These were connected by a tiny bit of material that could have snapped at any time. She had bright pink lipstick to match her dress, and 10 inch heels covered in studs. Her hair had gone all manky and discolored, because she tried to dye it one colour, and then another colour on top. I avoided her, quick.
There was a little cheer when people noticed I was here. They heard about me being in hospital, and some thought for me, it was the end. There were so many faces that I recognised, including my best friend Jas, hanging out with my other friend, Lucy. There was one face I did not recognise. The face of a new boy, a kind, freckly face, a good looking face. His brown eyes met blue eyes. Then...he smiled at me!
Life is not complete without a little smile.
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CadburyChocolate
Thanks for your support, guys!
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on November 24, 2013
Miatizz22
sad but gr8 keep writing
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on November 24, 2013
Catarla
The ending phrase is actually true! Great story BTW!
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on August 12, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Thank you, everyone! If you think I should make a sequel, then post on http://www.qfeast.com/question/3539/When-I-finish-my-story-should-I-write-a-sequel
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on August 10, 2013
Little.Blue
Amazingggg xoxo
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on August 10, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Thanks guys!
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on August 09, 2013
klovecutie03
Omg beAutiful story more plz
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on August 08, 2013
CadburyChocolate
We are so in sync! I'm starting to get creeped! :0
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on August 06, 2013
Little.Blue
Omg, me too!! I was exactly 4, this is crazy!!
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on August 05, 2013
CadburyChocolate
I am also undeniably going to become an author. It's been my dream since I was four. The first story I wrote was:
Isabell the Fairy was friends with the princess.
Isabell dropped her wand!
Oh no! said the princess!
Oh no! I start to shrinking! Isabella shout. See More▼
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on August 05, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
Vary good. It's vary we'll written. I am wanting to be a children's author. I my story pony pals goes good ill improve it then send it to my favourite authors the hunters (Erin hunter) or maybe to Lauren Faust:-B
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on August 05, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Thanks guys, love you all!
Btw, http://www.qfeast.com/page/783/Stop-The-Haters
That can help stop the hate!
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on August 04, 2013
T3R3Z1
Gosh this is sooo good yet so sad. :'( But I love it!
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on August 04, 2013
ChokolatLover
I'm so happy that shes better now.But it's just it feels weird cause all you guys are talking about getting bullied when I have never been bullied..l
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on August 04, 2013
Little.Blue
Love itttt
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on August 04, 2013
Little.Blue
Yes, it is.
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on August 04, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Thank you so much, it's really interesting to find that we share the same dream...
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on August 04, 2013
Little.Blue
Keep going, it gets better with every chapter!
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on August 03, 2013
Little.Blue
Aww, me too! That's my dream, to become to World's greatest Writer ever to live. Well, I have many dreams and ambitions, like to make a scientific breakthrough, but that's my biggest and original one. :)
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on August 03, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Thanks so much love you guys! My dream is becoming a famous writer, and you guys give me so much support!
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on August 03, 2013
Catarla
Oh no! the baby died! So sad! Please write more! I love it right now!
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on August 03, 2013
Little.Blue
So sad, keep writing! Waiting for the next chapter, but you've done so much today, so don't feel pressured to do the next chapter tonight.
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on August 02, 2013
Little.Blue
You my friend, are one very lucky person. I've experienced all 4 forms of Bullying:

-Physical
-Verbal
-Cyber
-Indirect See More▼
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on August 02, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Have you, that's so sad! I've never been bullied.
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on August 02, 2013
Mary_chan
its very true.. people can be so mean ive had my share of bullying.. :,C
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on August 02, 2013
CadburyChocolate
I totally will, I'll get started already!:D
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on August 02, 2013
Little.Blue
More intrigued than ever, absolutely CAN'T wait to read the next part!! Please keep notifying me every time you add a new chapter. :P
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on August 02, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Thanks so much guys, I love you! Next chapter is in the making!
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on August 02, 2013
XangelXx
this story is so sad already :c (but its very good!)
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on August 02, 2013
oliviarocks20
Wow that sound great! I think you writing is amazing!!! I
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on August 02, 2013
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