What they said to me

What they said to me

This is based on a true story, not about me, but about one of my closest friends. It's about a girl I know being bullied. I interviewed her and everything. I am now turning into her, to write her story...http://www.qfeast.com/page/783/Stop-The-Haters

published on August 02, 2013179 reads 40 readers 39 completed
Chapter 1.
When it began

When it began

Monday 4th September
Mimi's Diary.
I didn't want the holidays to end. I just knew my new school was going to horrible, I just knew it. You see, we have a very strange school system around here. When you are 4, in September you start "First school". When you are 9, you wait until some point in July, when you leave. Then you go onto middle school.
I knew middle school would be bad. I just knew it.
On the first day, I walked into the classroom and said, in my awful lisp,
"Hi guysh, it'sh nishe to meet you. Weady for mathsh?" Everybody laughed.
"Yesh, It'sh gonna be sho much fun!" Said a girl with a fake tan, imitating my lisp. I could feel myself turning red. Suddenly, Jas, my best friend from first school, stood up and said,
"Shut up guys. She doesn't choose to speak like that!"
"Look at that, a four-eyed brace face monster!" Said the girl with the fake tan. Me and Jas slowly returned to our seats.
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Do you think this girl was happy with her lisp?
Do you think Jas wanted to have glasses and braces?
Why was the fake tan girl so mean?
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CadburyChocolate
Thanks for your support, guys!
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on November 24, 2013
Miatizz22
sad but gr8 keep writing
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on November 24, 2013
Catarla
The ending phrase is actually true! Great story BTW!
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on August 12, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Thank you, everyone! If you think I should make a sequel, then post on http://www.qfeast.com/question/3539/When-I-finish-my-story-should-I-write-a-sequel
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on August 10, 2013
Little.Blue
Amazingggg xoxo
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on August 10, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Thanks guys!
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on August 09, 2013
klovecutie03
Omg beAutiful story more plz
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on August 08, 2013
CadburyChocolate
We are so in sync! I'm starting to get creeped! :0
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on August 06, 2013
Little.Blue
Omg, me too!! I was exactly 4, this is crazy!!
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on August 05, 2013
CadburyChocolate
I am also undeniably going to become an author. It's been my dream since I was four. The first story I wrote was:
Isabell the Fairy was friends with the princess.
Isabell dropped her wand!
Oh no! said the princess!
Oh no! I start to shrinking! Isabella shout. See More▼
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on August 05, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
Vary good. It's vary we'll written. I am wanting to be a children's author. I my story pony pals goes good ill improve it then send it to my favourite authors the hunters (Erin hunter) or maybe to Lauren Faust
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on August 05, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Thanks guys, love you all!
Btw, http://www.qfeast.com/page/783/Stop-The-Haters
That can help stop the hate!
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on August 04, 2013
T3R3Z1
Gosh this is sooo good yet so sad. :'( But I love it!
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on August 04, 2013
ChokolatLover
I'm so happy that shes better now.But it's just it feels weird cause all you guys are talking about getting bullied when I have never been bullied..l
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on August 04, 2013
Little.Blue
Love itttt
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on August 04, 2013
Little.Blue
Yes, it is.
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on August 04, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Thank you so much, it's really interesting to find that we share the same dream...
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on August 04, 2013
Little.Blue
Keep going, it gets better with every chapter!
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on August 03, 2013
Little.Blue
Aww, me too! That's my dream, to become to World's greatest Writer ever to live. Well, I have many dreams and ambitions, like to make a scientific breakthrough, but that's my biggest and original one.
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on August 03, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Thanks so much love you guys! My dream is becoming a famous writer, and you guys give me so much support!
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on August 03, 2013
Catarla
Oh no! the baby died! So sad! Please write more! I love it right now!
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on August 03, 2013
Little.Blue
So sad, keep writing! Waiting for the next chapter, but you've done so much today, so don't feel pressured to do the next chapter tonight.
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on August 02, 2013
Little.Blue
You my friend, are one very lucky person. I've experienced all 4 forms of Bullying:

-Physical
-Verbal
-Cyber
-Indirect See More▼
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on August 02, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Have you, that's so sad! I've never been bullied.
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on August 02, 2013
Mary_chan
its very true.. people can be so mean ive had my share of bullying.. :,C
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on August 02, 2013
CadburyChocolate
I totally will, I'll get started already!
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on August 02, 2013
Little.Blue
More intrigued than ever, absolutely CAN'T wait to read the next part!! Please keep notifying me every time you add a new chapter.
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on August 02, 2013
CadburyChocolate
Thanks so much guys, I love you! Next chapter is in the making!
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on August 02, 2013
XangelXx
this story is so sad already :c (but its very good!)
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on August 02, 2013
oliviarocks20
Wow that sound great! I think you writing is amazing!!! I
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on August 02, 2013