Lover Or Murderer? (final part)

Lover Or Murderer? (final part)

This story is about a girl named Aron who moved to a new town and doesn't know anyone but her crush/friend Jeffry, but jeff has some things from his past that might not let him.. open up to Aron

published on August 01, 2013140 reads 47 readers 25 completed
Chapter 1.

Youd Don't Understand!~

     "You promised you'd stay with me. FOREVER." Jeffry said frustrated.
     "Well I know I did.. but I didn't know we were going to be killing innocent people or any one for that matter!"
       He didn't respond, just stared at me.
     "Why can't you understand  that killing people is wrong!" I shouted and stood up, grasping his shoulders.
     "Do it for me Jeff, If you really care about me.. If you refuse to stop.. I'll end this now." I grabbed the knife, dramatically, and pointed it at his chest.
     "My life was made to end the day I was born! You would never understand Aron!"
   Without thinking, I slit the knife across his cheek, just leaving a deep wound.
     "Your a fool, if you think I'd love a monster like you!" I cried as I charged the knife into his chest, before he could block the fatal blow.
     After a few stabs.. I breathed heavily.
   But Jeffry was still alive..
     "Aron I won't ever regret meeting, and loving you, but you should also know that I'm not going to be the only one dying tonight." He snarled, weakly.
    Stabbing me in the back as I let my guard down.
   I felt the knifes sharp pain in the flesh of my back, twisting back in forth.
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weeping101
it was both a murderusly dangeras love story
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weeping101
please make another
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on April 22
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on April 22
DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
It is both. The best murderous love story.
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on March 12
awesomenessqueen66
I agree with @sparklygirlforever everyone else's are stupid make more you r the best writer in history!
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on February 23
Dauntless_Demigod
that was cool
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on July 28, 2015
sparklygirlforever
dude, seriously! make more! i've read other people's creepy stories, but they're so lame! pelase make more!!
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on July 16, 2015
sparklygirlforever
this was so CREEPY! but good story!!
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on July 14, 2015
EverymanHABIT
I wish I was Aron too....I'd do many things different though....Hey, I could make my own story....Where I'm Aron...But my name will be different...My friend will also be different! This might work out!
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on February 13, 2014
BasicCactus
So amazing
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on December 27, 2013
MatsuoLuca
this was amazing
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on December 27, 2013
seippup12
I wish I was Aron.... THAT LUCKY DUCK!
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on November 12, 2013
sandstorm8003
niiiiccccceeee
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on November 12, 2013
ilovecreepypasta
it was so BEUTIFUL. please make another story like this.
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on October 05, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
OMG THIS IS AMAZING WRITE MORE STUFF LIKE THIS
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on September 30, 2013
Rainbow_Bird
So good!
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on August 10, 2013
Mary_chan
U guys have made my day
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on August 05, 2013
Acacia_The_Goddess
wow.. This is AMAZING!!! I LUV IT!
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on August 05, 2013
Mawwy
waiting for u to make more stories
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on August 01, 2013
Mary_chan
ttttttttthhhhhhaaaaannnnkkk u
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on August 01, 2013
Mawwy
Wooohooo! I loooooove it! It's the best story eveeer
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on August 01, 2013
Mary_chan
thanks really it means a lot!!
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on August 01, 2013
RozenChara111
Your an awesome writer, also, I just can't stop reading this, so this is about my 7th time reading it, I really hope you do more stories
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on August 01, 2013
Mary_chan
why thankyou much!! ^_^
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on August 01, 2013
RozenChara111
This is really awesome, I really enjoyed it!!!
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on August 01, 2013
Mary_chan
well that's it I hope you guys enjoyed this awesome story I know I did!!! :3
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on August 01, 2013