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From Geek to Goddess
Hey!i'm Jean,Jean Gossimer I come from I small town.I moved to New York and started going to school in Hollywood Arts.Hollywood Arts is a special school for teens with special talents.This is about me going from geek to Goddess
anja888published on July 24, 201371 reads28 readers11completed
Well, um, I don't like being mean, so I'm just going to give advice: Make it linger, and make this just an introduction to yourself and the Prologue. Add a conflict through another character, add dialogue, a plot, a twist (maybe something like YOU"RE the bad character or something) then wrap it up with either a death or a happy ending, depends on how you like See More▼ to roll. Make the next chapters longer and include descriptive language like similes (comparing something to something else), metaphors (stating directly that something IS something else), and personification (describing inanimate objects as if they were living things). Hope this helps you with this story or any further stories you might write. ;) -ArtemisMoon91904
-ArtemisMoon91904