The Big Four

The Big Four

(I know; the most original title ever -- not) This is my fanfic of the Big Four. I've been working on it for a long time, and have it saved elsewhere, but I'm only going to release a few chapters at a time. If I get enough positive feedback (or feedback in general), then I'll keep adding. Here goes...

published on September 25, 2015110 reads 31 readers 2 not completed
Chapter 1.

Foreword (Please Read; It's short, promise)

As you'll probably notice in the next few minutes, there are two parts to chapter 1. In one, only Hiccup and Merida are first person. In the second, it's Jack and Rapunzel. Whenever you see the three dotted lines between paragraphs, it switches between them. In later chapters, it switches randomly between all four. Let me know if you have problems telling whose perspective you're reading from.

Please comment! Every comment means sooo much to me! Often, one comment is the difference between me quitting writing a series or continuing. And I can definitely take negative feedback. Be candor with me and don't leave out any little critique!

Thanks so much for reading this! :)
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Lady_Artemis
HOLY CRAP THIS BE SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
YOU MUST WRITE MORE, PLEASE, JUST, MAKE THIS STORY BIG! WRITE MORE, WOMAN!
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Lucky_Queen
You like it that much? I'll go ahead and add a few more chapters. One min...
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on September 25, 2015
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on September 25, 2015