Foreword (Please Read; It's short, promise)As you'll probably notice in the next few minutes, there are two parts to chapter 1. In one, only Hiccup and Merida are first person. In the second, it's Jack and Rapunzel. Whenever you see the three dotted lines between paragraphs, it switches between them. In later chapters, it switches randomly between all four. Let me know if you have problems telling whose perspective you're reading from.
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