The haunted house

The haunted house

This story is about a boy named Gregory who moves to a new house together with his family. Everything begun when the family spend the first night in their new home, they start hearing noises, screaming, things moving around, and they start seeing ghost. The family doesn't know what to do with the house and decide to call a church's father to stop the bad ghosts in their home.

published on July 17, 201310 reads 8 readers 1 completed
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Chapter 3.
The ghosts finally appears

The ghosts finally appears

The father arrive to see the house, but when he see it he got scared the father says "I can't help you I have to go" Rosanna exclaimed "what do you mean you can't help us?","father please my brother is inside the house" Rosanna's mother replied "father please help us my son is inside the house if we don't get him out he probably will die inside there" Gregory's father says "please father help us I want to see my son again". The church's father tell them why he can't get inside the house he says "I can't go back to that house because that house trap my brother a long time ago, I never seen him again". "The people of this neighborhood never told us that this house was possessed by evil spirits when I loose my brother my life end in that moment my parents got divorced they never forgive me because they say that was my fault that my brother disappeared" the family was surprised that the father lived in that house they living now. Rosanna exclaimed "father maybe there's a chance to save your brother and my brother too, so please help us to save my brother and we help you to save your brother too" with this words Rosanna convinced the father to save Gregory and try if there still a chance to save his brother. The father start blessing the house Rosanna and her parents push the door very hard to open it, but later the powerful force grab them all into the house the door closed and they start seeing the evil ghosts the father start with an oration to stop the ghosts madnesses. One of the ghost hit the father with a portrait and the rest of the ghost begun hitting Rosanna and her parents the ghost were mad like they want them out of the house, they keep attacking the family with no remorse and the father too. The father start the oration again the ghosts start feeling bad later a portal start opening on the floor the father send the ghost to the portal and closed it forever with a blessing sealed. The family grab Gregory they went outside, they try to wake him up then he wake up and exclaimed "what happened mom, dad, and Rosanna" Rosanna replied "we save from the bad ghost who wants to hurt you" his mother says "I'm glad you okay Gregory" his father says "thanks god that you're okay and the father too" the family hugged each other with a happy smile the father went out very sad Rosanna exclaimed "father did you find your brother?" The father respond "no I couldn't find him probably he's gone for ever". Gregory see the house and see a man coming where they are Gregory yelled "a ghost coming" they turn and see the man, the man hugged the father and say "I'm your brother" the father couldn't believe finally he has his brother back they hugged each other Gregory's family were so happy to see the brothers united again. The father and his brother say good bye to the family, Gregory's family decided to move to another place where there are no ghosts around. The family buy a precious house with an amazing view and a big pool, but in Gregory's mind there still the awful moments his family passed and himself he never going to forget what he being trough together with his sister, mother, and father. Gregory went to a new school where he meet new friends trying to forget the past and be a normal kid like he used to be before he moves to the haunted. THE END
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JenniferXoxo
I'm scared this is great
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on July 17, 2013