*Knock knock, 'Whos there?'

*Knock knock, 'Whos there?'

A horror story I just felt like making up, hope you enjoy! :) P.S ts made up and I would say 8+ ;)

published on May 28, 201329 reads 28 readers 8 not completed

Chapter 1 . *Knock knock, 'Who's there?'

Dear diary,           29th oct.

Today was such a good laugh! we played knock a door run on the street. You should have seen the peoples faces when they opened  the door! They went drip white when they realised nobody was there, such a good prank can't wait to do it again on halloween! anyway I'm going back out tomorrow, to do it again but since mum and dad are out me and my mates can go to lake lane street! its really far but we will just bike there? hope I don't get caught by mum and dad! I'm not aloud down there. Well I will just set an alarm on my watch for when they back, they will never know!

*Next day*

Dear Diary,        30th oct.

OMG.. can't belive what just happend! we saw this dark figure in the tree and we all thought it was a bird. Was it?
it was tall, dark, and a human figure. Mind you it was eight o'clock it could of been any thing in October. Now its 9:15 where are my parents? looking for me?
nope, not a chance they will never find out where I went! But hey look on the bright side! its halloween tomorrow! eeekkkk.
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sapphirethehedgehog
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on April 24, 2014
planetfroot
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on January 01, 2014
ActingPower13
Yay! More!
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on November 04, 2013
kadesta.dignam
It's because it's only the first chapter! As I make more graduatley then it will become more gruesome ect..
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on July 23, 2013
booberry
not bad... but I agree with owl361.
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on July 22, 2013
fleur22045
more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 12, 2013
kadesta.dignam
Thanks, will do soon!
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on June 03, 2013
Acacia_The_Goddess
Please Finish!! It's good so far!
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on June 03, 2013