continuing the ginki

continuing the ginki

same thing as the ginki just kept writing it, hope you like it its really cool

published on November 26, 201213 reads 10 readers 6 completed
sorrows and mistakes

sorrows and mistakes

as he showed her his eyes she gasped at the shardes of glass in them. " daneil!" she screamed. but he stopped her in her trackes." shhhh." things walk among us" that was all he said as he walked away from her." i must keep you safe." " in order to do that i need you to go home." he walked towards her with a pleading look on his face. even though he looked sincere she knew it was all an act to get her out of here. so she would be safe while he risked his life to save hers." nooo!" she screamed " i wont let you turn me towards home while you die here alone." " nikki, this is my destiny, i must die so you wont .... you are important to this land." just as he said this an enormous creature crept around the corner. it stalked a shadow and turned toward them. it was hideous! its eyes were slits of blackness that held the secrets of dastirdous deeds of all the crimes he did. his mouth was just a jagged pile of teeth upon teeth. it looked as if he just took a load od shark teeth and poured them in his mouth. he didnt have a nose. but somehow she knew hw didnt need one.... then in one swift motion daneil jumped and chopped its head off. nikki tried to scream but all that escaped her mouth was a wift of air.




to be continued....
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ChokolatLover
Good story! Like the imagination
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on July 31, 2013
mikycamry
thanks for liking it!
thinking about adding more
but i need your absolute truth of what you think of my story
especially you Mythsandlegends
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on December 07, 2012
Robot
graet!
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on December 07, 2012
Mythsandlegends
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on November 28, 2012
mikycamry
plze comment
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on November 28, 2012
yurikoneko
i like it ^-^ miky btw ... idk
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on November 27, 2012