I'm a maid but my master thinks otherwise part 3 (ongoing)

I'm a maid but my master thinks otherwise part 3 (ongoing)

READ PART 1 AND 2 ON MY PROFILE TO UNDERSTAND THE STORY xx Tyvm xx Sofia is a prtty, kind girl, which makes other people jelous. Her master is a vile old man who treats her very....dirty. She finaly escapes his house after years of being called names and being abused by the other maids there and the masters daughter and wife. There was a handsome boy, the masters son, who saved her on numerous occassions, but now he thinks she's vile and a wh**e like the others. One day she will find him and explain. Now she's in the country side, and training to become a country girl. Her heart skips for the handsom heart throb every girl adores called Jimmie, but he's an arrogant pompos and anyways, he's cOURTNEYS.

published on June 02, 2013180 reads 45 readers 17 not completed
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Chapter 5.

Chapter 5

I wake up to an awful racket and a dreadful headache. I find myself in a soft bed with a wet cloth clinging to my forehead. Aunt sits beside me on a stool. "Aunt... This is your room..." "Never maynd dat! Lass, yer worried me sick. Other than Courtney, yer startin to feel laike one of my daters now!" These kind words make me sob. "Oh thank you! You do not know how much that means to me!" The old women's face softens. "Oh lass, what I would do to give every girl like you a mother." Loud shouting could be heard from downstairs. "What's that noise?"

Aunt rolls her eyes. "It's Jimmie and Courtney fighting agayn! Jimmie's only gawn and cheated on Courtney with her best friend. She caught them eating each others face off! Jimmie's a fool. Courtney's a worthy lass, with every lad fighting for 'er and now he's just gambled away the opportunity." I wince. I should be feeling happy that Courtney got what she deserved, but, well, Jimmie? He sort of let me down. But what was I hoping for anyway? Atleast I stopped myself from getting carried away, especially last night. Jimmie's a nuisance, and cheating on Courtney with her bestfreind, disgusting. He only ever stuck to me because I was a challenge for him.

BANG! A door slams shut downstairs. "THAT'S RAYT! GEDDOUT AND STAY OUT! CLINGING TO ME LIKE SCUM AND STALKING ME EVERYWHERE!" Ouch. I can't believe he just said that to Courtney after what he did. Aunt gets up and races downstairs, ready to pinch Jimmie's ear.

BANG! The door slams shut again, this time by Jimmie. God this was not doing my headache any favours.

*Sorry for the short chapter! I added 2 more chapters, and if I get more comments and rates *comrates!* I'll be posting 2 more! Sooooo... What do u think of Jimmie now?"
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Comments (17)

MelJerboa
This is sooooooo good!!!!!!!
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on April 10, 2015
ELINAviolets
I agree with the comments, please make more, PWEASE X3
That's all ^-^
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on April 09, 2015
J.Killa
GAAAAH!!...IT WAS SOOOO...OMG ROMANCE! but,....kinda messed up on my reading with the country accent..but hey, LOVED EVERY BIT ^_^..CANT WAIT FOR MORE..hehe
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on November 06, 2014
Stars_In_The_Sky
It's really good so far keep it it up!
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on March 03, 2014
Nightcat
Please please please? A few more chapters?
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on February 11, 2014
faceme
amazing
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on February 10, 2014
fleur22045
I can't believe what jimmy did to Courtney, this does not make him look that good!
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on July 17, 2013
girlonfire
Added 2 more chapters! xx Just 4 u xx
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on July 06, 2013
Thehost
Keep writing
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on July 01, 2013
girlonfire
Aww x
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on June 28, 2013
fleur22045
You are amazing!!!!!
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on June 23, 2013
bunnyboo13
More!!!!!! I LOVE ur stories plz finish the 3rd!!!!! Plz
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on June 20, 2013
girlonfire
Aww thanx guys!
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on June 03, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
you are an awesome writer. please add more. :)
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on June 03, 2013
Ponygirl_Pegasister
great story the best
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on June 03, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
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on June 02, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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on June 02, 2013