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This is a short story about what would have happened if Draco Malfoy and Hermoine Granger had got together.

published on April 27, 201370 reads 26 readers 29 not completed
Chapter 1.
Reminiscence-Draco

Reminiscence-Draco

She glided past me as I left the Great Hall. I looked into her eyes, and remembered what that idiot Krum did to her at the Yule Ball. If she'd gone with ME, I would have never treated her like that ! I hesitated. Don't be such an idiot, I thought to myself. Mother and Father would never allow you to think like this about a MUDBLOOD! Besides,she's a Griffindor. Father would have a fit!!
However,to my surprise, i found myself following Hermione up the stairs and into the library. I walked over to her table. "Hi!" I whispered. She didn't look up- she had her nose in a textbook, as usual. I coughed loudly. Hermione looked up from her work, looking puzzled. "Oh, Draco, it's you!" she cried. She frowned. "What are you doing here? Why aren't you with Crabbe and Goyle?" I blushed and turned away from her. "I just wanted to talk to you because...well...I love you. Iv'e loved you since the very first day at Hogwarts- Iv'e just...never...had the guts to do it." I smiled nervously. "Until now." Hermione rose from the table. "WHAT KIND OF CRUEL, SADISTIC JOKE IS THAT, YOU EVIL, MESSED UP JERK?!" SHE YELLED. She raised her fist, as if to punch my face, then hesitated. "It wasn't a joke..." I said quietly as she followed me into an isolated corridor. "I understand that know," she said. "you know, Iv'e always hoped..." Hermione moved closer to me. "Always wondered..." "Yeah?..." I said under my breath.

"That you would like me, because.... Iv'e loved YOU from the start aswell. You know Draco, I never wanted to go to the Yule Ball with Victor. I really wanted to go with ....you".  She took my face in both hands and kissed me. I have no idea how long it went on for- all I know is, I never wanted it to stop. We were so in to it that we didn't notice footsteps along the corridor.



We were only interrupted by a loud cough and a very stern, incredibly nasal voice behind us.


"Draco, what is the meaning of this?!" Professor Snape spluttered.
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killedbythesketchbook
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on November 14, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Aw thankyou :3
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on November 14, 2013
peace_out
You have got to write more I mean seriously I don't know why you haven't written more yet you have a true talent!!!!!! Xxx
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on November 12, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Thanks Also I'm not really sure about the name...you'd have to give me more information about the plot
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on August 22, 2013
blank
P.S. love this book!
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on August 14, 2013
blank
Hey since my email that connects to Qfeast never stays connected. I just want to asked you if I make a book about Mason what shoild it be called?
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on August 14, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
#shadowbolt332: I could, but I don't have any fresh ideas just yet.

Maybe you have some...?
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on July 23, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
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on July 21, 2013
vintagebird
OMG!!! I love this story!!! You HAVE to write more!!!!!
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on July 20, 2013
vintagebird
OOPS! Sorry! I see you've already addressed that issue in the comments! Forgive me
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on July 20, 2013
vintagebird
Just saying, you wrote "dementor" instead of "death eater"
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on July 20, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Um well I could but I've kind of run out of ideas- plz help
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on July 19, 2013
PowerOfThree
Could you add more?
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on July 19, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Guys on the 3rd chapter it says "Dementor"- it was meant to say Death Eater- sorry :3
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on May 15, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Please can someone comment on this?? It's quite lonely and epressing on my own TT.TT
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on May 13, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Sorry about the "houe" typo- it was meant to be "house"!! Soz :3
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on May 11, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Thanks for commenting this was my 1st story
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on May 11, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Thanks to everyone who commented and/or favourited this story. It's my first one and I wanted to make an effort
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on April 29, 2013
GONETOOLATE
Mind blown. 0.o
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on April 29, 2013
blank
I really like this story!
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on April 29, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
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on April 27, 2013
LexiCha
Yep... He likes collecting Movies of all sorts.
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on April 27, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Oh poor you :'(

But I'm glad you've seen the films :3
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on April 27, 2013
LexiCha
O_O Oh. I-uh. Don't have 'em. But my dad has all the movies.
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on April 27, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Aaw thanks :3 But.........

READ THE BOOKS NOW!!!!!!!!!
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on April 27, 2013
LexiCha
I've never read Harry Potter but that. was. EPIC!! XD
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on April 27, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Thanks Clove!!! Thanks guys :3
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on April 27, 2013
Clove
Nice twist
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on April 27, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
I love draco he's my favorite character from the harry potter series =D
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on April 27, 2013