Bloody Mary

Bloody Mary

I dare you to read on a spine chilling thriller of the real story of bloody mary Watch out for bloody mary returns which is MUCH scarier

published on April 07, 2013128 reads 59 readers 34 not completed
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Chapter 2.

Mary

Then came the night when the daughter of the miller rose from her bed and walked outside, following an enchanted sound no one else could hear. The miller's wife had a toothache and was sitting up in the kitchen treating the tooth with an herbal remedy when her daughter left the house. She screamed for her husband and followed the girl out of the door. The miller came running in his nightshirt. Together, they tried to restrain the girl, but she kept breaking away from them and heading out of town.
The desperate cries of the miller and his wife woke the neighbors. They came to assist the frantic couple. Suddenly, a sharp-eyed farmer gave a shout and pointed towards a strange light at the edge of the woods. A few townsmen followed him out into the field and saw Bloody Mary standing beside a large oak tree, holding a magic wand that was pointed towards the miller's house. She was glowing with an unearthly light as she set her evil spell upon the miller's daughter.
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tans_daddy_SaNs_da_meme
I liked it is was scary will a littel
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on September 09, 2016
XXRuby
cool story;)
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on July 12, 2016
R.M.OandB.M
I mean I kno ppl dnt believe it doesn't mean it aint a good story
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on October 26, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
and u ummm don't hav 2 be so rude about it right?
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on October 26, 2013
MEGS0316
um..... u people dont actually believe in this crap, right??
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on October 26, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
hahhahaha lol ur luky ı dnt belıeve ın ıt uva wıse ıd be screamın lol xxxx:p
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on July 25, 2013
Mary_chan
hey my names mary! :oD
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on July 22, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
welcome hope I helped sorry im useless at dis stuff xxx
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on July 22, 2013
Mawwy
okay thanks
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on July 22, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
ok so basically log on search for qfeast and send a message to as many of dere accounts as possible xx hope I helped xx
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on July 22, 2013
Mawwy
Oh actually i have a fake id so how am i suppose to ask
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on July 21, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
SUGAR! erhhh soz Jamie im bummed for ideas y don't u quickly make 1 wiv a fake name ask den deactivate it? xxx
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on July 21, 2013
Mawwy
I had an fb acc but now i deactivated it!
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on July 21, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
hmmm seems like they've put down the help page I dunno why... do u have facebook? if u do go on qfeast quizzes add them or send dem a help message and they'll answer xxxx
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on July 21, 2013
Mawwy
yes plzz!!
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on July 21, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
mmmm not sure what's that about why don't you send a email to qfeast support shoulda giv u the email ? xxxx
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on July 20, 2013
Mawwy
i would but qfeast keeps saying plzzz activate ur acc by the email sent to your email acc but i never got any
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on July 20, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@jamie tell me about it message to everyone read my new storie seperated xx
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on July 20, 2013
Mawwy
These things are stupid but fun
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on July 18, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@Jamie ikr xx
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on July 18, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@owl361 ikr itz stupid n a myth but because its at night ppl are 2 scared 2 try it hhahah :) xx
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on July 18, 2013
Mawwy
I've tried it 2 years before and more than one time! Nothing happened to me!!
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on July 16, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
thnleur xx
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on April 30, 2013
fleur22045
Creepy...
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on April 23, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@icecat IKR i havent done it buh my mates are stupid enough2 believe itz real :P :/xx
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on April 19, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
In kindergarten i tried bloody mary because no one else would and i figured out that it is not real. :/
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on April 19, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@everygirl2012 I understand but these are ment to be short stories I am not really ready for long stories yet but when i am i will ditto take ur advice thnx bbe xx
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on April 07, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@beauty784 hahhaha lol u neva know the powers of the unknown ;) xx
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on April 07, 2013
Little.Blue
*too successful* it was a typo, sorry guys.
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on April 07, 2013
Little.Blue
I wouldn't exactly describe it as scary, but you have a great imagination, and to engage the reader, you need to make it more interesting, maybe add some more chapters, and cut out some of it, you need to get some action in, and maybe speech, instead of just one big introduction, and sure, there were a few punctuation mistakes, but other than that, your doing See More▼
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on April 07, 2013
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