Bloody Mary

Bloody Mary

I dare you to read on a spine chilling thriller of the real story of bloody mary Watch out for bloody mary returns which is MUCH scarier

published on April 07, 2013129 reads 56 readers 36 not completed
Chapter 1.

Bloody

She lived deep in the forest in a tiny cottage and sold herbal remedies for a living. Folks living in the town nearby called her Bloody Mary, and said she was a witch. None dared cross the old crone for fear that their cows would go dry, their food-stores rot away before winter, their children take sick of fever, or any number of terrible things that an angry witch could do to her neighbors.
Then the little girls in the village began to disappear, one by one. No one could find out where they had gone. Grief-stricken families searched the woods, the local buildings, and all the houses and barns, but there was no sign of the missing girls. A few brave souls even went to Bloody Mary's home in the woods to see if the witch had taken the girls, but she denied any knowledge of the disappearances. Still, it was noted that her haggard appearance had changed. She looked younger, more attractive. The neighbors were suspicious, but they could find no proof that the witch had taken their young ones.
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Ticcitoby12346
I liked it is was scary will a littel
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on September 09
XXRuby
cool story
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on July 12
Dawnstar
Once, My friend and I dared to do it. We saw a shadow behind us even though it was dark, but that was all. It was still scary. Kinda.
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on August 04, 2015
Dauntless_Demigod
wow that was awsome
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on June 16, 2015
R.M.OandB.M
I mean I kno ppl dnt believe it doesn't mean it aint a good story
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on October 26, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
and u ummm don't hav 2 be so rude about it right?
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on October 26, 2013
MEGS0316
um..... u people dont actually believe in this crap, right??
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on October 26, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
hahhahaha lol ur luky ı dnt belıeve ın ıt uva wıse ıd be screamın lol xxxx
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on July 25, 2013
Mary_chan
hey my names mary! :oD
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on July 22, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
welcome hope I helped sorry im useless at dis stuff xxx
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on July 22, 2013
Mawwy
okay thanks
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on July 22, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
ok so basically log on search for qfeast and send a message to as many of dere accounts as possible xx hope I helped xx
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on July 22, 2013
Mawwy
Oh actually i have a fake id so how am i suppose to ask
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on July 21, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
SUGAR! erhhh soz Jamie im bummed for ideas y don't u quickly make 1 wiv a fake name ask den deactivate it? xxx
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on July 21, 2013
Mawwy
I had an fb acc but now i deactivated it!
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on July 21, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
hmmm seems like they've put down the help page I dunno why... do u have facebook? if u do go on qfeast quizzes add them or send dem a help message and they'll answer xxxx
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on July 21, 2013
Mawwy
yes plzz!!
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on July 21, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
mmmm not sure what's that about why don't you send a email to qfeast support shoulda giv u the email ? xxxx
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on July 20, 2013
Mawwy
i would but qfeast keeps saying plzzz activate ur acc by the email sent to your email acc but i never got any
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on July 20, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@jamie tell me about it message to everyone read my new storie seperated xx
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on July 20, 2013
Mawwy
These things are stupid but fun
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on July 18, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@Jamie ikr xx
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on July 18, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@owl361 ikr itz stupid n a myth but because its at night ppl are 2 scared 2 try it hhahah xx
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on July 18, 2013
Mawwy
I've tried it 2 years before and more than one time! Nothing happened to me!!
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on July 16, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
thnleur xx
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on April 30, 2013
fleur22045
Creepy...
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on April 23, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@icecat IKR i havent done it buh my mates are stupid enough2 believe itz real :/xx
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on April 19, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
In kindergarten i tried bloody mary because no one else would and i figured out that it is not real. :/
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on April 19, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@everygirl2012 I understand but these are ment to be short stories I am not really ready for long stories yet but when i am i will ditto take ur advice thnx bbe xx
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on April 07, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@beauty784 hahhaha lol u neva know the powers of the unknown xx
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on April 07, 2013