Poetry

This is going I be a collection of my poems. I hope you enjoy them:)!

published on April 02, 201313 reads 12 readers 10 not completed
Poetry

Counting

I'm counting the days
The hours
The seconds
Until I can finally see your face

I'm counting how long I've waited patiently to see you
(It seems like an eternity)

I'm counting how many days I've been in love with you
(Since the day I first met you)

I'm counting how many times I've longed to see your smile
Your eyes
Your hair
And remembered you were gone

I'm counting how many times I wished to hear your laugh
Your footsteps
Your voice
Your whispers

I'm counting how many times I've wanted to kiss you
Hug you
Hold you
And then remembered you were miles away

I'm counting how many times I've wanted to say I love you
But couldn't seem to find the words

I'm counting the number of my heartbeats until I see you
One
  Two
     Three...
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Comments (10)

ActingPower13
awww, beautiful! :)
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on January 03, 2014
Bmac99
Aww, thank you so much <3
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on December 29, 2013
peace_out
Its beautiful I really love it. You have a talent of writong and poetry. It would be quite a let down if I grow up and find you haven't became an author. Its just the right job for you.
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on December 27, 2013
Bmac99
Thanks:)
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on May 25, 2013
fleur22045
aw, that is great
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on May 25, 2013
Bmac99
Thanks for the feedback!
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on April 07, 2013
wolfness
Beautifu!
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on April 07, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
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on April 06, 2013
Beauty784
I like it!
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on April 03, 2013
Gisselle
Nice!!!
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on April 02, 2013