Torn Within (Sonic the hedgehog)

Torn Within (Sonic the hedgehog)

its about sonic the hedgehog and this hedgehog named kai changed sonic into an evil villen and you will never know what will happen next

published on October 25, 201245 reads 41 readers 22 completed

The Nightmare, and the Vampire

"Die Sonic die" A voice said as Sonic was running, running from the voice. "DIE SONIC THE HEDGEHOG DIE" said the voice  "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!" Sonic sat up shivering from the nightmare that he had, it was 2 in the morning and Sonic was feeling cold from the nightmare and then Sonic felt thirsty so he went to make himself some hot choclate with marshmellows.
Once Sonic made his hot choclate he felt something cold running down his back. Sonic shivered and he thought it was nothing but then something broke his cup and the hot choclate spilled all over Sonic and he screamed. It felt like there was a burning stove when you touch it for a really long time. Sonic was screaming in pain, his hands were bleeding and he grabbed a towel and washed his hands, then he heard laughter from outside. Sonic turned to see who it was but it was no one and then someone or something threw something though the window, Sonic however saw that it was a huge rock with a piece of paper and it said"Sonic surrender or face the wraft of me Mwahahaaahaaaahahahhahaha" but Sonic does not know who's it from. So Sonic threw the piece of paper in the trash, then Sonic tried to go back to bed but then woke up at 4:35 am. Because he had that nightmare again. Sonic couldn't sleep for the next 3 days because of the nightmare, on the 4th night Sonic was finally asleep but then he felt something painful on his arm, then he woke up and he saw blood marks on his arm, he ran to the bathroom and he looked at the marks. He was terrfied cause of the marks and he putted some bandeges on his arm and he decided to go back to sleep after 2 hours he woke up and he saw a blue and black hedgehog, he had gold eyes and he had gold rings just like shadow's and then the hedgehog said "Time's up Sonic", Sonic screamed and then the hedgehog tried to grab Sonic but sonic got away as fast as he could, but the blue and black hedgehog caught him and he threw sonic into the wall. it caused sonic too much pain. sonic screamed really loud and he fell down, sonic yelled "WHO ARE YOU", the blue and black hedgehog said" My names Kai, Kai the hedgehog.Then Kai picked up sonic and threw him through the window and Sonic was covered in blood and he screamed "LEAVE ME ALONE ". Kai said " time is up now sonic. Kai grabbed sonic and then said "Say good bye to your old life and say hello to your new life as a VAMPIRE MWAHAHHAHAHHAAHHAHAAHAHHAHAHA". And that is when Kai bit sonic in the neck and Sonic screamed in pain untill he felt no pain anymore, and that is because he is a Vampire ( ok so Sonic is turned into a vampire and i will start doing this for example like this --> Amber: whats up <--  like that oh and amy is pregnant with a baby girl on the way( by the way she is 8 months pregnant) so here we go with the next day with Amy,Knuckles, Tails and Cosmo walking in the park

Tails: hey has anyone seen sonic for the last 4 days cause i have not seen him
Knuckles: no but i think he is running around so i dont know
Amy: well he better be here when the baby is around
Cosmo: i feel something is not right with sonic
Tails: how come Cosmo
Cosmo: i dont know but i feel that something is not right
Amy: well i hope it's not because he better be here


Later on Sonic and Kai were in a secret lair and Sonic met some of Kai's friends, a green fox, a purple hedgehog, and a black and grey hedgehog
Kai:Sonic meet Jordan the fox, Victoria the hedgehog and Drake the hedgehog
Sonic: Hello Jordan, Victoria, and Drake.
Jordan: Hiya Sonic
Victoria:Why Hello Handsome
Drake: Hello
Kai: These are my friends and your the newest member heheheheh
Sonic: Arn't i Heheeeehehehhehe

well that is chapter one and also i havent figure out what the baby's name will be and plzz dont hate me about this story :(
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Comments (22)

MarvinDaHegdehag
Kai es soooo hawt! Moar pls! Dis is gud stuf!
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on July 27, 2015
AshleyAmbrose
ikr! but i cant do it anymore cause my tablet broke
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on March 14, 2014
Silvermoon
You kinda forgot some punctuation but it's pretty cool
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on March 14, 2014
Emowolfgirl
This is awesome
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on January 11, 2014
AnimeLover999
Love this story
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on January 07, 2014
Idiot_Killjoy
Wow you did a really good job!!! Cant wait ti read more!!!!
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on June 02, 2013
AshleyAmbrose
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on December 22, 2012
Eolhc.OverLord
I love it SONAMY!!! I'm really glad were friends
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on December 21, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
Aww thanks amy.archer,106
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on December 17, 2012
amy.archer.106
awsome story
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on December 16, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
Ikr! and what was your dream about Breezycorner XD
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on November 06, 2012
Breezycorner
Sonic a vampire I had a dream where.......
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on November 04, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
and @sonicthehedgehog ikr
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on October 29, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
Thank you @sonicthehedgehog and @Leigh07 XD
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on October 29, 2012
Nobody.07
that was slightly scary!! It was awesome!! I love how you gave the hero pain! His emotions, fears!! I hate when the story goes like this: *Villain* punched *hero* so hard in the stomache is was knocked to the ground. *hero* jumped up, kicked *villain* and the *villain* begged for mercy. The only thing i didn't like was that all i know is tails and amy are sonic's See More▼
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on October 28, 2012
sonicthehedgehog
awesome story love it! SONIC MY FAV!!!!
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on October 27, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
thank you oceangirl XD
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on October 26, 2012
oceangirl
Its good
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on October 26, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
Thank you Cassia XD
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on October 26, 2012
Cassia
Epic!
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on October 26, 2012
AshleyAmbrose
thank you dedeea i will write the next one soon
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on October 25, 2012
Dedeea
I love your story, it is captivating. I wait forward to read your next chapters. Good luck!
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on October 25, 2012