Warrior Cats Character and Name Review

Do you have a Warriors character you want to use in an RP or a fan-ficion, but you just want to make sure they are solid? This is the place for you! I rate leaders, deputies, warriors, queens, apprentices, kits, medicine cats and elders. I am a Traditional namer and I suggest Trad. names only. Don't be too offended if my review is not to your liking, this is all just an option you may or may not choose! I will include a guide to Trad. naming in the first post.

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Hey, just reminding everyone this is still open and offering advice about any Warriors OC's.
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on January 08
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Name: Frosttail
Age: 15 moons
Gender: Molly
Appearance: Fluffy, snow white with blue eyes. She can't hear super well but she is a master at lip reading.
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Warrior
Personality: bubbly, silly, happy, but can be a serious jerk sometimes. See More▼
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T3R3Z1
Yeah, that's totally fine
on January 07
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SmolBeanie696
@T3R3Z1
Well, his former Clan, DawnClan (Made-Up Clan), lived near lots of twolegs and understood lots of twoleg customs. So, that's where he got the name from.
on January 07
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T3R3Z1
Cool! I suggest Cypresspaw. Cypress is a type of tree that grows in wet areas (psst, ShadowClan) and has reddish/rusty/brownish bark. Or Stoatpaw. Stoats are from the weasel family and again, have a rusty-ish fur colour. Martenpaw would also be okay, again, martens are a type of predator a bit similar to weasels and such. Or Minkpaw, minks are very much like See More▼
on January 06
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SmolBeanie696
@T3R3Z1
Okay! :3
on January 06
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T3R3Z1
Okay, if you ever write that bio again keep in mind to make those things clear. Also, sorry, I thought Rowanfire was Frosttail's brother AND mentor. Oh! One more thing! About Rustpaw's name: I'm not 100% if cats would understand what "rust" is. I mean, there's a chance but they'd have to be familiar enough with man-made metal things that are so old that they See More▼
on January 05
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on September 23, 2015
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(So this is pretty much the form?)
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Clan:
Rank: See More▼
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T3R3Z1
Actually, you don't need backstory, it's a thing people have been adding. Also no need to add siblings, mate, kits either.
on January 03
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on September 23, 2015
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@X_Soul_Taker_X will be helping with some of the reviews, just so y'all know!
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on September 22, 2015
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Name : Silverfur
Age : 12 moons
Gender : Male
Appearance : Striking silver tabby tom with darker stripes down his back, one jet black paw, one icy blue eye and one amber eye and a jet black tail tip
Clan : RiverClan
Rank : Warrior
Personality : Silverfur is a curious, but loyal warrior of RiverClan. He is silly at times and serious sometimes. Although he has a weak spot, losing members of the clan and family, he is still strong when they die. He is forgetful and regrets things See More▼
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Blue_the_Raptor
Thx!
on September 22, 2015
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T3R3Z1
Dude, you have one solid character! I suggest making both his eyes amber though, realistically he wouldn't have heterochormia, and remove the one black paw, again it's quite impossible. If he's an excellent fighter you may wanna use -claw or even -fang as the suffix, -fang means he is good at both fighting and hunting. I don't get how sometimes he's serious and See More▼
on September 22, 2015
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Blue_the_Raptor
Ok!
on September 22, 2015
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AngryGayFish
It is fine other wise!
on September 22, 2015
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AngryGayFish
I would say that for okay hunter and good eyesight kida cancel out each other.. Also, same with the weak spot. Just saying! ^^;
on September 22, 2015
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on September 21, 2015
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Name: Thorn That Pricked Your Paw (Thorn)
Age: 20 moons
Gender: Tomcat
Appearance: http://www.qfeast.com/Rustpaw/profile/photo/ZJ3ZHm
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Warrior
Personality: Although Thorn is fiercely loyal to his mate and Clan, he can have some outbursts and is best to be avoided during those times. As said before, Thorn is fiercely loyal and will do anything for anyone and anything he cares about. He's mostly chill and calm, but he's also sophisticated and a hard worker. See More▼
Rustpaw's Photo: 84 / 107
Rustpaw's Photo: 84 / 107
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T3R3Z1
Okay. One imortant note: joining a Clan means devoting yourself to its culture. Any newcomer should accept a proper warrior name when he/she joins a Clan. Also, if he's chill why are his outbursts so intense? I dunno, being chill and angry are pretty much opposites Maybe make him a bit stressed, he's trying to keep his cool but ends up loosing it sometimes. See More▼
on September 22, 2015
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on September 21, 2015
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Not sure if this page is still going, but... ^-^U
(I hope he's not too OP)
Name: Duskstripe
Age: 35 moons
Gender: Tomcat
Appearance: Duskstripe is a large, dark orange cat with black tabby markings. He also has a thick-furred tail and cheek fur. His ears are somewhat small and more rounded than most cats, he has pale amber eyes, and a small scar under his left eye.
Clan: ThunderClan See More▼
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T3R3Z1
Scratch the jumping/climbing I'd say, keep the hunting but not as his strongest side and definitely keep his fighting skill
on June 16, 2015
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BasicCactus
Ah. Thanks!
I figured his size would make him a slow climber/jumper. And for his name, I think his new one will be Hornetclaw.
;-; So as for his slight OPness, how about scratching the climbing, jumping, hunting, and making him a little less powerful in the strength category?
on June 14, 2015
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T3R3Z1
Personality: c: yes, you may call him a little OP but not much. Excellent fighters do tend to be sheer of size, but what really makes them good at it is practice, practice, practice, the desire to learn new battle moves. However their size may not be especially helpful when climbing, and jumping isn't really such a notable skill so I say keep it to excellent See More▼
on June 14, 2015
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T3R3Z1
Ah no, this is still going c:

Mind if I rate this one a little bit differently?

Name: I suppose it's meant to be a remainder of his black stripes that contrast against the rest of his ginger fur. Well, I have to inform you, such coloring on a cat is impossible, sorry! How about you change him to a dark ginger tabby with stark, outstanding stripes? As for actual See More▼
on June 14, 2015
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on June 13, 2015
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Position: Medicine Cat
Name: Littleclaw
Gender: Female
Look: Small gray cat with blue eyes
Personality: Snaps at other cats easily causing sudden mood swings. Hard to change her mind once she's set on doing something. Gentle with kits and hurt/sick patients
Clan: WindClan
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Deathkirby
I didn't know that lavender was like that. Also you gave me the name of the RiverClan medicine cat.
on May 02, 2015
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T3R3Z1
http://ailuronymy.tumblr.com/post/27054473266/prefix-lavender

If you want to keep the name as Littleclaw that is perfectly fine. /This is all a suggestion/.
on April 30, 2015
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Deathkirby
It's a rough draft right now. I'm fixing details before I even start writing anything down in the story. Also Littleclaw is a name I've had for years. She was going to be a warrior but at the last second she decided to be a medicine cat. It's a reminder of what she was going to be. Also lavender is red not gray.
on April 28, 2015
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T3R3Z1
Okay. Not going to rate her the default way because there is basically nothing much to rate. Her name doesn't suit her too well, that I can say. You never mention her to be little, and obviously a cat that is average size would not be named Little-. -claw is rather used for skilled fighters. There are loads of prefixes I could give ya, but your best shot is Lavender- See More▼
on April 27, 2015
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TH3EVERChAnGiNgN4M3
on April 20, 2015
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on April 20, 2015
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Description: Grey with silver, white, darker grey and black markings. Long-ish tail and average length coat. Her eyes are bright green
Name: Eveningclaw
Gender: molly
Personality: brave, stubborn, smart, curious, determined, trustworthy, suspicious when given reason, loyal to her clan, impulsive
Skills: great hunter and fighter, good climber, average speed, stealthy
Notes that you may want me to take into consideration: in ThunderClan
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T3R3Z1
On a side note, an array of adjectives for a personality is the easy way out of developing your character. Try a more descriptive format another time, it will really bring Eveningclaw to life!
on March 22, 2015
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T3R3Z1
WHAT WE CAN IMPROVE ON: Strike out the loyalty. Loyalty is the first thing a kit feels towards the Clan, no need to acknowledge the basic things that builds and binds a Clan. Just a bit on her suspicion, if you combine that with her curiosity you'll have endless possibility. Always on lookout for a disturbance? Over-analyzing everything? Spying? Uncovering non-existent See More▼
on March 22, 2015
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T3R3Z1
WHAT WE HAVE: I actually like the flow of this personality. Looks like a street-smart, witty molly who can't sit still without a mystery or problem to solve, and once she's on trail there's no stoppin' this stubborn lady! Mind's locked on it, no way out of it, venturer at heart. Plus, she'll go great lengths, being the brave explorer she is. Looks like she has See More▼
on March 22, 2015
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T3R3Z1
ABOUT THE NAME: Evening- is used for gray cats. Preferably darker ones but I don't mind. Her coloring here is very varied and I'm not certain if it is realistic. If you can find an image I may be of better help, if not, I'll try and fix this up. Sounds like a black silver tabby to me, but not entirely. The white markings would have to be removed, and instead See More▼
on March 22, 2015
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on March 22, 2015
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Name: Burnwhisker
Age: 19 moons
Gender: Shecat
Clan: WindClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: She has dark red fur, large paws, and long whiskers (hence her name '-whisker'), she is also very thin and smaller than average
Personality: She is very loyal to her Clan, she's also very energetic and always ready to help her Clan. Her energetic nature hides her strength and ferocity in battle which may result from being overprotective of her Clan and littermates l See More▼
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T3R3Z1
WHAT WE HAVE ;; Loyalty is the first thing a kit should feel towards its Clan. You have no real need to put it down, I think. And why should her energy hide her ferocity in battle? I think it should betray it, an energetic cat is bound to be one big, clawing and biting whirlwind on a battlefield!
WHAT WE CAN IMPROVE ON ;; She obviously cares for her Clan very See More▼
on December 26, 2014
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T3R3Z1
ABOUT THE NAME ;; I have a few things to talk about when it comes to the suffix, but her name is a bit...mean. Would a queen really look at her kit and say 'Ah well, she obviously looks like a fire swept over her so let's name her Burnkit!'? Or would a queen say 'Ahh! My eyes! It burns!'? Chances are low. Then there is -whisker. Funnily enough, it describes a See More▼
on December 26, 2014
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on December 26, 2014
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Guys, while reviewing, it's really gonna help me if you give more than three-word personalities. I actually don't care for the history that much, as I said a while back I only need the basics, with a bit of an emphasis on the personality. Thank you
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on December 25, 2014
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name: Lizardtail
gender: she-cat
clan: ShadowClan
rank: warrior
appearance: dark brown fur with brown eyes
personality: somewhat icy, but very strong in battle
skills: swift, and a good climber See More▼
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Fearless
thanks! I'll try to work on that
on December 25, 2014
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T3R3Z1
WHAT WE HAVE ;; Somewhat icy, but very strong in battle. Hm. Okay.
WHAT WE CAN IMPROVE ON ;; Character development. I love a long, juicy personality, I may even give examples later. Anyway, what makes her a bit icy? Is she rude or a bit of a lone wolf, or brash or mistrustful or what? And what fuels her on in battle? Why is she so fierce? An old grudge perhaps? See More▼
on December 25, 2014
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T3R3Z1
ABOUT THE NAME ;; It is very good! However, Lizard- is better for cats who are somehow patterned. -tail is an ideal choice tough
NAME SUGGESTION ;; If you want to keep Lizard- make her tabby or dappled. Other dark brown cats names are Adder-, Bat-,
Beetle-, Bramble-, Briar-, Cedar-, Dark-, Dusk-, Ivy-, Kestrel-, Lizard-, Otter-, Sparrow- and Vole-. Besides See More▼
on December 25, 2014
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on December 25, 2014
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Gender: She-cat
Clan: WindClan
Rank: Deputy
Appearance: Sleek long-furred silver she-cat with blue eyes. She has a long scar on her belly and a notch in her left ear.
Personality: Brave, loyal and understanding, but if you mention her brother she will get very angry and resort to sarcasm. In battle she is fierce and very dangerous.
Skills: She is fast, even for a WindClan warrior and can also jump extremely high.
Siblings: Fox ( An extremely dangerous evil rouge) See More▼
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Fuse360
Thanks. By the way though, in Cloudstar's journey, there is a cat named Icewisker who is silver.
on December 27, 2014
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T3R3Z1
WHAT WE HAVE; Loyalty is not really a trait that should be mentioned, loyalty is the first thing a kit should feel towards its Clan. Other than that she is a brave and understanding cat, both are good traits for a deputy. The she gets all don't-you-dare-mention-that about her bro. If I can also mention, her history is a bit stereotyped and Fox is that cliched See More▼
on December 24, 2014
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T3R3Z1
ABOUT THE NAME; Icestorm, correct? Ice- would imply a regular white cat, so if you want to keep it make her white. Her suffix is a bit shady. -storm implies a cat who has a personality marked by many ups and downs. If she has brighter days, when she is that brave, responsible deputy, and lower days when she's touchy and sarcastic, it's fine. If her moods don't See More▼
on December 24, 2014
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on December 24, 2014
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Name: Acornwish (born Acorn)
Gender: She-cat
Age: 14 moons
Rank: Med. Cat
Clan: WaterClan
Apprentice: Raspberrypaw (white she-cat with red eyes, albino)
Personality: Impatient, kind, trustworthy See More▼
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T3R3Z1
Yes, Frecklewish is canon. Acorn- is ideal for lighter brown cats tough. Anyway, if you want a loveable grump, I suggest you make her grumpy most of the time, with a softer spot ever now and then, trying to look tough and serious but secretly being warm and friendly. Maybe she's still a bit mistrustful? Or maybe she was nice at first but grew cranky with age? See More▼
on December 24, 2014
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evvvie_s
Trust me, I have had a LOT of people get to me about the name I just looked on WCWikia and saw the first prefix (Acorn) and last suffix (wish). Voila! I'm going more along the Yellowfang route for medicine cat personality, she's kinda like Yellowfang but more... Gentle? I don't really know... She was my first OC so... Yeah. Thanks for the review!
on December 24, 2014
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T3R3Z1
WHAT WE HAVE; This cat has a three-word personality. That is very little, the personality should be the thing you write about most while creating a cat! Anyway, if she is impatient, why should she be so trustworthy? How do you know she's isn't gonna get frustrated or bored or something? If she is kind, why is she impatient? Shouldn't kind cat be understanding See More▼
on December 24, 2014
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T3R3Z1
Welcome to the show! Let's get this party started, and remember, don't be too miffed!

ABOUT THE NAME; She is genuinely a dark brown tabby. Acorn- would be more suitable for light brown/golden cats. -wish is a bit unusual and not recommended. It does not really say anything about the cats, maybe except that they...have a wish or are optimistic! It's vague and See More▼
on December 24, 2014
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on December 24, 2014
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Alright guys, open for posting! All I need to know for a review is;

Description
Name
Gender
Personality
Skills
Notes that you may want me to take into consideration. See More▼
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T3R3Z1
Don't worry, I still reviewed her. Feel free to use your own form but I'll need to k ow those basics.
on December 24, 2014
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evvvie_s
Just posted mine. It doesn't quite fit with the base but...
on December 24, 2014
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on December 24, 2014
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HOW TRADITIONAL NAMING WORKS-SUFFIXES

A suffix may describe a cat's skill [-claw for skilled fighter, -foot for a fast runner, -tail for a swift cat or good climber, -whisker for hunters, -nose for trackers, -leaf for VERY skilled medicine cats, -fang for a good hunter AND fighter, -flower for good, caring mothers and -stream for swimmers.]

A suffix may describe a cat's personality [-heart fir outspoken cats who will always believe that what they do is right, -cloud for patient, See More▼
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T3R3Z1
Typo on Crowstep, I meant that they STEP like a crow.
on December 24, 2014
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HOW TRADITIONAL NAMING WORKS-PREFIXES

The prefix describes the cat.
It mainly describes the colour of the cat, but on some occasions, size.
The name has to be quite specific, you won't find a Finch-, but you may find a Brambling-.
The names cannot be vague.
Tree-, Bird- and Flower- aren't okay.
Elm-, Sparrow- and Dandelion- are fine. See More▼
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on December 24, 2014
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