OMGOMGOMG its sooooo good! You've seen my drawings, and my drawings get crappier every time! But you wereborn to be an artist! Hikari, I think it might be all that anime...you put in a FREAKING COLLARABONE, BLUSH, NOSE, AND EYEBROWS.
AAAAAA cute!! The only think I see is that the eyes could be a bit further apart, and lower down on the face, and maybe the mouth a bit higher! Keep up the good work, though! It looks very nice!