Insanity (1)

Insanity (1)

This is my shot at making a creepypasta. Tell me if you enjoyed ^_^" "It's not my fault..."

published on July 27, 201561 reads 16 readers 35 not completed
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Chapter 9.

Little Red

I escaped out of my recent victim's house and followed this guy.

Something just possessed me to do it.

I sped walked as he walked casually, his hands calmly in the pockets of his hoodie.

Seeing his breath in the cold of the night as his hair danced in the gentle but chilling wind made me stop in my tracks.

The streetlights made him look...perfect...

Then he...stopped.

I stopped as well, waiting to see what he stopped for.

He then turned to the left, not knowing I was there.

He pulled a switchblade and looked at it under the streetlight.

I stood and watched as he brought the blade from his jaw to his collarbone.

I gasped lightly and sprinted to him.

Just before he could do another cut I lowered his blade forcefully.

His eyes were closed and had an angry expression.

"The hell are you doing," he asked with his teeth gritted.

"Stop," I said calmly taking the blade away.

He then smirked, "well, well, Scarlet is becoming a hero."

I sighed, "now why would I do that?"

He then opened his eyes halfway which looked slightly seductive, "it was joke little Red, take it easy."

I felt the heat in my face rise again, "y-yeah...sure."

He then chuckled and leaned against the streetlight, "so...why'd you follow me?"

"I didn't...I was coming out of that house and then I noticed you hurting yourself," I lied smoothly.

He then raised an eyebrow at me, "oh really?"

I nodded then felt his fingertips lift my chin.

"I doubt that you just happened to notice in the knick of time," he said leaning off the streetlight.

I felt my breath trying to escape my lungs quickly but kept breathing calmly.

He chuckled seeing my face, "are you nervous about something?"

I shook my head but he brought his lips only centimeters away from mine, feeling his cold breath on my lips as he deeply whispered, "how about now?"

I had gotten chills but was locked in his eyes.

He smirked then looked out to the sun, "hmm...sun's rising...that's the que for me to go to bed, see ya later."

He then left me standing there a bit dumbfounded but almost breathless.

I decided to sprint into the forest and wait until night came around again, hoping to see this guy again.

'Why won't he tell me his name? Odd...'

I then thought of the nickname he gave me.

' 'Little Red'...that's new...'
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Iluvcookies
THIS STORY IS JUST TOO FRAKING GOOD! THE SUSPENCE THO
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Iluvcookies
Omg, AWESOME! NEW CHAPTERS WOO
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Silent_Scarlet
XD yus!! I've taken advantage of my writers block being gone for a while so ive been coming up with more ideas :3 i hope you enjoy them!! :3
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on August 22, 2015
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on August 22, 2015
Iluvcookies
Yay! Chapter 6 is out!!! But I always got that feeling that man could be Jeff... Idk Lol
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Silent_Scarlet
XD awesome!! Thank you!! X3 hmmmmm *sits in thinking beanbag staring at a lava lamp* hmmmmmm...
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on August 14, 2015
Iluvcookies
I would probably spend those 300 dollars on gaming stuff but Idk, And I would LOVE to help you with ideas! *Puts on thinking helmet* I'll tell ya once I get some ideas!
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on August 14, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
XD i was just thinking about who that guy can be...it's like having $300 to yourself and wondering what you can do with it first X) perhaps you could assist me in some ideas? Ill be sure to give you some credit for helping out if ya do :3
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on August 13, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
X3 awwww thank you!!! I've had writers block on what to write so far and it has been nagging at me XD (oh and chapter 10...ermahgerd... perfection!!!! X3)
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on August 12, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
XD yeah, thank you for the patience!! I've been thinking of all the possible routes I can take with this story X3 hehe
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on August 12, 2015
Iluvcookies
OMG OMG YAYAYAYA ITS OUT CH 5 IS OUT
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on August 11, 2015
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on August 04, 2015
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on August 04, 2015
Stardancer
This is awesome.
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Silent_Scarlet
Thank you!! I'm so happy it was enjoyable!! I've another story almost like this if you'd be interested (Eyes of the Shadows) ^_^ thank you for reading!! :3
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Stardancer
Your welcome :)
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on July 29, 2015
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on July 29, 2015
AquaNoodles
I love this! I'm not much of a HUGE Creepypasta fan much anymore, but I still enjoy the stories :)
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Silent_Scarlet
X) my top favorite is Jeff... *blushes lightl* hes...really cool ^///^
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AquaNoodles
>:3
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
>XD fear the crazy!!! *flails arms weakly*
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
XD*
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
HehehehehEHEHHEHEHEHEHE XF
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
X3 oh Jeff, i drew your beauty and you took the picture...meh not fair Jeff!! ...youre still cool though X3
Oh my >X3 haha
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
XD JEFF YA A WIMP
Also on this pic; my month is Yandere >:33 <insane chuckling>
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
*Deep breath in then out* laughing jack is the only cool clown...Jeff can kill the others >:3 oh and i put up my drawings of everyone's (so far) Jeff ran away though so I'll have to draw him again XD
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
XDD <paps> shush XD Clam child.. Connect with UR inner clam XD
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
>XD exactly!!! The one clown that doesn't phase me is supposed to be scary but if i see a friendly (o.o not so friendly) im gonna have a panic attack and maybe hit the clown if possible and then pass out XD why brain?! Why!?!?! XD
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
XDD LEIK- IM FINE; I JUST HAVE A PHOBIA AND I DON'T LIKE CLOWNS; YET I LOVE LAUGHING JACK WHICH IS ANOTHER CLOWN! :D
Like- WAT
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
XD i know right? It even surprised my mom XD it's just something about those bright colors that get me is my guess...thats why i avoid people in real life, i feel threatened by them o.o but it's pretty weird huh XD
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
XD That's messed up XD (not u, the weird thing with L.J and other clowns XD) and yea! ~(•3•)~
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
They're both awesome X3 for some reason...i can look at laughing Jack and not have a problem...but if i see one of those original clowns i will cry and shake and i will get violent soon after a few minutes of crying o.o but sure, I'll put some of my drawings in my photo thingy on my profile in a moment :3 (oh yeah, i also drew Doctor Smiley X3 )
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
Also, may I see some? :3
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
O yea I forgot I also love the Jacks XD
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
Me too ^_^ ive been drawing them X3 so far I've drawn BEN, Jeff, Slenderman, Clockwork, Sally, Ticci Toby, Eyeless Jack, and Laughing Jack :3
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on July 27, 2015
AquaNoodles
Same! But I also love the brothers, Sally, Clockwork, BEN, Toby, Smile Dog and many more
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on July 27, 2015
Silent_Scarlet
@MustacheMasterBoss I'm so glad you enjoy this!! :D it makes me so happy this story is so far off to a good start ^_^
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AquaNoodles
No problem! I've kinda miss having to love the pastas and fangirling over them ;) seb- aww the memories
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