UnderPOV (point of view)

So you may have seen Revery do this and your right she has XD she wants me to do one too since I've played ut as well so as her disclaimer goes, go play the game if you haven't unless you want spoilers squid!

published on April 1025 reads 9 readers 6 not completed
Chapter 1.

The calling

I woke up groggy it was around six AM in the morning at the little place I usually stayed at, a little house a friend let me use while there away since I had no  family since I turned thirteen. It was a cool morning a nice temperature around around fourty degrees fahrenheit and I prefered the cold of winter as opposed to the heat of summer. Mount Ebott was in the distance from the window next to the bed a whiles away from the city and sometimes  I'd hike over there just to get away from civilization but every time I would go it felt as if..... Something was pulling me towards the mountain..... Wanting me to stay and loom around more for something or someone but what exactly I couldn't tell..... I looked over at the counter next to my bed and looked at a little piece greenish fabric I found on the mountain, it looked like a piece from a greenish shirt and I thought it looked weird just sitting there on the mountain a bit near the summit but I had to wonder..... Did somebody go up there a die...? My mind shut off that topic almost instantly.

It was now around noon and I had eaten a decent meal and was getting ready to leave to go to the mountain again but I had this feeling that it I went today after around the fifth time in less then a week something bad would happen..... That didn't really dent my will of going and exploring the mountain. I grabbed my black leather coat and put it on followed by my backpack and walked outside, it was snowing lightly not too harsh and not too light but just the right amount where one could just hang out and sit around in the snow for hours. Mount Ebott was far from the city where we lived and I usually drove out there in my vehicle and parked down at the bottom of the mountain as I hiked up higher and higher everyday. I half expected to find a dead body when I went up there since I found that piece of clothing and see who went up there or how long a body had even been up there ontop of the mountain.

I parked at the bottom of the mountain next to the trail I would use to get up the mountain and it was a pretty nice trail and I never really saw anybody come here at all since I saw a sign that warns of demons ahead but I guess that was whoever owns this plot of land saying stay the heck away but that didn't really stop me. I got closer and closer to the top passing the sign again the snow crunching under my boot as I continued to walk further and further going farther then I had last time. At last I had finally reached an area that was flattening out but with a giant hole in the center. As I got closer I saw a kid standing next to the hole I couldn't tell if it was a boy or a girl "hey kid?" I called out "this place is dangerous to be out all by your lonesome" the kid looked over at me with a seemingly sinister smile
"And what are you doing here?" The kid sounded smarter then they looked but I noticed that this kid was wearing a green striped shirt and that they had a hole on a small part of it my mind thought that the fabric piece I found belonged to this kid. I didn't want to take to long to hesitate in response but the kid had moved and was now behind me "hey where'd you go?" I looked around and didn't see them anywhere.
I walked closer to the hole and peered over "hope they didn't fall in...." I felt a hand behind my back "you should really watch your back" my eyes widened in shock as I felt I was being shoved over..... As simple as that I fell in the last thing I saw from the surface was the kid laughing in a deep demonic voice and then darkness as I hit the ground.

I woke up, a sharp pain was in my left leg I had the feeling I fractured it on the way down. I reached for my back pack for my supplies but my pack was gone and nowhere in sight in the darkness below. I stood up winching in pain as I looked around, I noticed I was on a bed of yellow flowers "must've broke some of the fall.... But not all of it..." I limped for a bit seeing a doorway nearby but before I got there a yellow flower popped out of the ground "what the....." I said out loud as the flower had a face, two eye slits and a mouth it seemed to smile then spoke in a happy high pitched  country voice "howdy I'm flowey flowey the flower, golly you must be new here to the underground!" I didn't feel safe around this flower felt like I was in danger but I couldn't exactly run away with my stupid fractured leg "uh huh keep talkin flower" I started to limp away anyways

The flower quickly got annoyed by this and it's voice changed to a deep dark intimidating voice "HEY IM TALKING TO YOU DONT BE SO RUDE!" I tried to limp away faster "yeah no way jose" "it's flowey!!!" "Whatever!" I was almost at the door when I tripped and fell "AAAHHH!" I wailed out in pain landing on the leg that was fractured, I even noticed some blood starting to pool out of the black pant leg "shit....." The flower appeared in front of me this time "Golly it looks like your hurt...." He was speaking in his normal voice but how he was going about it was scaring me..... "And you know what....." His face started to contort and distort into a horrifying smile and big white eyes instead of slits. I tried to back away "IN THIS WORLD ITS KILL OR BE KILLED" I saw little white bullets line around me, I held my arms up defensively and braced for the end "d-damn....." I never thought I would die at the hands of a flower....
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WastingMyLifeOnline
Cool, I've been meaning to make a story of this concept. It seems very interesting. Nice story.
However, when you spoke of a person with a green striped shirt, it was confusing. That must've been Chara, correct?
But Chara is dead. At the end of the genocide run, they tell you that you awoke them from their death when you fell underground. They wouldn't have been See More▼
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ZealyWealy
So chara is did but when they pushed my character into the underground they were just a very powerful manifistation waiting for a new human to show up so they could shove them down
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WastingMyLifeOnline
Oh, cool. I get it now.
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ZealyWealy
Its a fanfic so me and revery have our own versions of it that still follow a somewhat basic story line you see
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Fiendish_Heathen
Why chu nuh give me pie? ;-;
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Fiendish_Heathen
Really great so far. Can't wait to see more! ^^
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