Balenor's Sweetheart - Hayley's Story

Balenor's Sweetheart - Hayley's Story

In this story, meet a young mage by the name of Hayley Suntora, and her story of how she became the last hope in saving her kingdom from Mosino and the Void.

published on August 19, 201452 reads 17 readers 21 not completed
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Chapter 4.
Chapter 2: Know No Limits

Chapter 2: Know No Limits

*Yeah, I figured I could do with a couple of chapters from the view of the Void. Hope this is good!*

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Shilena
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I am standing close to the front of Castle Balenor. Lord Mosino sent me on a mission to investigate this event. Now that our enemy, Hayley Suntora, is 16 and allowed outside of the castle, we can finally plan our final strike. From what I heard around the Void, Mosino wasn't always our King. A man named Yaros was, and he was the one who killed Hayley's parents, Gina and Maximus. I was sent out to investigate the consequences of that event, and I reported back that the guards in the castle decided to lock the gates and keep Hayley safe inside the castle until the day she turned 16.
And now that the day is among us, for which we at the Void have waited so long for, we can finally start planning how best to end the reign of the Suntoras once and for all.
After Hayley steps outside, she is greeted by Elise and Sofia. Elise is the Commander of the Imperial Temple of the kingdom, and Sofia is a Priestess to their precious Saliora. We at the Void take no notice of Saliora. She's Balenor's Goddess and also the Goddess of Health. No. Not for us though. We're not soft goody-goodies. We don't believe in weaklings like Saliora, and we will certainly NOT live under the reign of a Suntora!

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"Hey, Shilena!"
I just returned to the Void and Jessica is the first to greet me. Jessica and I are great friends.
"Hey Jess. How's things?" I ask.
"Could be better to be honest," she replies. "I just got back from spying on the temple."
"Good timing huh? I just got back too."
And we tell each other everything we saw and heard. She tells me that the temple will now have to start recruiting more people than usual because of Hayley being free, and some of the soldiers will have to act as bodyguards to Hayley. I then tell her everything I saw at the ceremony in Cloud City.
"A little low..." she says. "Hey how about we go see Lord Mosino together about this?"
"Yeah," I reply. "I don't want to stand in there alone with just me and him. I sometimes get a shiver."
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Comments (21)

AlwaysBeInfinite
This new chapter..... Is too freaking... BOSS TO BE TRUE!!! XD
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on August 22, 2014
Silestra7
Name: Shilena
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Personality: Calm, Outgoing, Loyal
Loyal or Traitor: Traitor See More▼
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Weiss_Schnee
Sounds good.
I really need to make a chapter for the Void's POV now XD
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Silestra7
BTW, Shilena's a spy for the Voids. If she is wandering around, she has blue eyes from contacts.
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on August 22, 2014
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on August 22, 2014
Cristallite
Could you please write more? And you know my oc from the game and rp page..Im addicted to wartune now..
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on August 22, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
Name: Element
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Class: Archer
Personality: Brave. courageous, Smart, deadly, and serious See More▼
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Yes, she will be loyal to her.
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on August 20, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
One more thing I need to know, which I've just added into the form in the story.
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XxSiderionxX
Name: Alex
Age: 16
Gender: female
Class: knight
Personality: brave,smart,cool, funny
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Weiss_Schnee
Would she be loyal to Hayley or not?
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XxSiderionxX
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Cristallite
Could Autumn be in there please?
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Cristallite
You already know my character. Frpm the page and gams
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on August 22, 2014
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on August 20, 2014
RoseHeart
Ca you use Katerina all the stuff is on the Wartune rp page you made
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Weiss_Schnee
Sure, but I can't put that she's Hayley's sister.
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RoseHeart
Please well ca they at least be cousins and Kat can be from Haley's mom's side of the family so technically she wouldn't be a suntora
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on August 20, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Well I put in the story that Hayley's the only Suntora left.
So if I say that Kat is her sister, people are gonna send hate mail.
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on August 20, 2014
RoseHeart
Why not? could you include it at some point later in the story
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Dat_One_Crazed_Fangirl
Awesome!! Plz right more!
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on August 20, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
Love it!!! XD
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on August 20, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on August 19, 2014